All Comments on 'My First Kiss'

Had to stop reading as it was hard to keep track of what was he saying.

I too found it difficult to read.

Please English learn before you compose try to story a!!!!!!!!!

Get someone to proof read your story before having it posted. Spellchecker works wonders, try it!

I really like this story

Avoid those adverse comments. The story though less in events, is fine and realistic in discription. I enjoyed it. There are some proof errors, but should not overshadow it's content quality.