All Comments on 'My First Sexual Experience'

All wife need to be like this one. Do what they are told .

I rated this low, not because of your writing skills, but for the bully of a, and I use the term loosely, man.

I agree this guy is sick.

Anyone that thinks like the person below is an asshole, a woman isn't someone to use and abuse but to be loved and cherished.

Don't bother writing another chapter if it's like this crap.

try the noncon genre for those of us that dont like to see women basiclly raped

I found this a powerful and disturbing story. I am intrigued by character of the bride, and especially her willingness to confront a new world, despite the horrible way she is treated. I look forward to the next chapter. Thank you.

Thanks for your story. It was both touching and well-written. I'm a professional writer and editor and I can tell you that you have lots of promise as a writer. I wish you well. I have a few comments about the piece and if you'd like to hear them, please write to me at paladin_svcs on Yahoo.com.

A great example of a sexually inadequate male who has no respect for women.

wow....that's nothing short of rape....good grief...as someone above me said, don't bother with chapter 2...disgusting!

don't write anymore unless she cuts his dick off and finds a loving partner...

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Don't listen to the negative comments, this is great! Post more!

That is what is so screwed up about those "backwoods" Penacostal, Church of Christ, Amish denominations.

This one is interesting. It has this combination of modesty and 'savagery' maybe. I kinda' liked it.