All Comments on 'My First Story'

by regularguynsac

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eightballbumeightballbumabout 15 years ago
Keep going!

It's got a great base of charactors. I'll keep reading the rest of what you write to see where this is going.

PrincessErinPrincessErinalmost 15 years ago
Great

Great beginning of a story. Off to read the next chapter.

samsmoothsamsmoothover 13 years ago
Excellent

The buildup was intense ... cant wait for the next installment

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Why do you go from 1st person to 3rd and back again ?????

Why do you change from 1st person to3rd and back again???

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