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All Comments on 'My Friend's Girl'

by BobThePerv

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latin_loverlatin_loveralmost 14 years ago
Nice, but too short

Good job, but you could have spun the scenario out much longer . . . let your imagination run wild

lust_4_ulust_4_ualmost 14 years ago
well done

Good story line - good portrayal of characters and believable! I also like that how you ended it, can be picked up in a second chapter. I hope you will continue to write!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Good First Effort

I liked what you have. It could have been longer...or you could continue it.

aslan72aslan72almost 14 years ago
Well done on First Effort

For a first time writter, Well done. I agree it could have been a little longer or continue the story in a sequel. I'd love to hear what happened next.

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