All Comments on 'My Girl'

Really interesting. Hope you continue it!

Mistress is really a softy, the second one I've encountered in two days. What happened to the good old-fashioned rock-'em, sock-'em, strap-'em, fuck-'em-through-the-mattress Mistresses? Your concept is really good, even if your writing, though largely correct, is a wee bit cliched; but the story is as bland as the canned chili; throw in a little McIlhenny's.

I need to commend you for your excellent story. It's quite refreshing to let the mind interpret the rest of the story with the foundation you have layed.

As far as i am concernedyou can ignore Estragon's comments about the story being bland. Not all readers stretch to Estragon's sordid tastes.

Thank you for an enjoyable story.

I like the way you write, not just the prose but the style. Please keep writing stories like this, I loved it.

Just an unexpectedly lovely story.

I was expecting something a bit more sexy, but this is incredibly erotic as it is. Leaves a lot to the imagination, all for the better. Hope to see more like this from you.

Great story. 5 out of stars.

The concept and plot is amazing, I get that you wanted to leave the rest to the imagination,however, I wouldn't have had any problems with you taking charge of the entire journey......I suggest or rather I am begging for a sequel, where you take control of the entire story......I want that 'great sex scene'.....a fan in the making!

You'll probably wont read this after all these years but I enjoyed the story, too bad you haven't written any more.

You certainly have talent. Thank you for this excellent piece. Such a shame that you have not posted further, but perhaps your mistress did not require you to write again.

I gave this a well dederved 5.

Well done! A great story. I hope your mistress was pleased. I do like a happy ending, and this story fully satisfied that need!