by Amyfriend
You need to find a GOOD editor to do some serious work on your stories before they are posted. Many problems in this story.
Amy, how does it feel to know that thousands of men are sitting naked in front of their computers stroking their hard cocks while reading your stories? Your harem is larger than you will ever know.
Great chapter to a very erotic and sensual story. Looking forward to the cotinuation.
Excellent writing!!
DC
Oh Amy thanks for letting me know that you were posting the continuing parts...
This is a truly awesome series! Well written, vivid, sure to excite!
Great job!