by Freddyj881
Wow again!! What happens next? Great writing! Great Story!! The wife and I both love your writing and it gets us in the mood!!! Maybe my wife will allow me to shoot it on her face? yeah...she is sitting right next to me while I write this!
Poor Katy gets orally raped because of her "beloved" husband... I think she would most likely be a happier woman in the long run if she divorces the selfish loser, sells the house and goes somewhere else to rebuild her life.
Mis-wired husbands like this one seem to have a fatal fascination with self-destruction, and in their slow suicides they often drag others down into their deranged fixations.
Is Katie nothing more than a brain-dead doll passively following her husband to destruction, or will she stand up and defend herself from rapists since her husband is too willing to throw her to the wolves? She knows where her rapist works, why can't she arrange an "accident" for him as he goes to work?
Can this couple pull back from the brink??
that you are able to kill a good story of 4 chapters in so few lines. blackmail drugs or what ever it is, black dicks gangbangs, slaves torture. is was so far about the best story in a long time here. now you went from high above good to crap in a second
I don't just want to read about a wife who has sex with her husband at work, in the car, on a train, on a plane. The story has to go somewhere and I found this very erotic. It seemed Katie didn't mind giving the guy a blowjob and obviously her husband liked it.
Well parts 1-4 were good. I knew what was gonna happen with the video and it's ruined the story for me.
If it had been me Joel wouldn't have had to walk out the door. I'd have buried him in the backyard next to the dog.
Based on the previous comment submitted, I can attest that the idiot husband is the fiction of the author and his shitty direction for this story. Additionally, it is so unrealistic that such a situation needs to be listed in the non-erotic category.
A REAL man would pound the shit out of any 22YO fuck who came to the house to blackmail his wife. "OOOPs, he slipped on the stairs....." his word against mine - which is more realistic?
Do real men still exist or has this site fallen to the panywastes of Euro-origin?
Smokepole
I can't wait to read the rest of this series but I need to take a break right here, that was great.
Story was great until now. Guess having a Husband and wife rediscover each other without fucking someone else was too much to ask.
its fine, but the spelling is so atrocious!! it is mesmerized not memorized!
Love the grammar police commenting on an old story! The first letter should be capitalized of a sentence! @olblueyes it should start off “It’s fine, but the spelling blah blah blah”.
I’m torn, very much a jerk move to post the video. Same with blackmailing. That said I think she is going to crave more cock because of it and he is becoming more of a cuck and will be eating more n more cum himself. Serves him right … just a guess