All Comments on 'My Hot Wife Katie Ch. 10'

by Freddyj881

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
loved the whole series

as my name is also katie i found it very easy to pretend i was your wife, i loved every story and look forward to reading more xx

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Well Done...

Nicely done. Good build and the snippets you've created with this mini-series is well crafted. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
oh come on

she really should have given her husband a nice view of Nikis big tits and have her suck, that would have been a nice present.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Nice Twist

Loved the twist of Katie getting revenge, hope the series continues.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
more from nikki

i resemble nikki and am around the same age so id really like to hear more about her from you...freddys vindication for katie and phil's exploits??

licketysplit725licketysplit725about 14 years ago
Proofread and edit

I couldn't get to page 2 due to the constant grammatical errors.

flowernibblerflowernibblerover 11 years ago
This story is really hot!

Yes, this is a really hot story to me. You can see that I gave it 5 stars, as an indication of how much I liked it.

26thNC26thNCalmost 5 years ago
No

There is no such thing as a hot wife. You are either a wife or a whore, nothing else.

PervertedKnightPervertedKnightover 2 years ago

Had you had an editor to fix your changes in tense and corrected your misspelled words, I would have given you a 5, but I do like the way you write hot sex scenes, so I gave you a 4. I enjoyed how you had Katie slapping away Nikki's hand when she tried to touch our hero ... I didn't see that one coming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I can’t believe how many English teachers read this stuff … do I notice? Sometimes. Does it make a big deal? I can get past it. Does my lil dick grow? Yes. Would I like my wife to do these things? Quite probably. Would I watch? Most definitely. I liked especially that he did as his wife said.

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A husband/wife team who love to write about our sex lives, fantasies, or a combination! We aren't trying to be the next Shades of Grey but use writing erotica to expand our own sexual gratification. Email us at katiekcjackson@gmail.com

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