All Comments on 'My House, My Rules'

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don-donna2don-donna2almost 18 years ago
Nothing erotic here

The fucking story is fucking full of fucking words like fucking and fucking and fucking and fucking

It sure doesn't do much to get one's penis hard or their pussy wet.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
dads girl

i loved this story. a bit short but it was worth it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
meh

it was ok, were was the action? make it longer and it will be hot

daddyponchodaddyponchoalmost 18 years ago
to be contuied?

I hope there is a chapter two

Dirty_Old_Man3Dirty_Old_Man3almost 18 years ago
Fun story

Sure, it was short, but it will allow for many more chapters if the author chooses to go that route (let's hope so)! A little more description of the action that is taking place and a little more dialog besides angry name-calling would be cool too! Here's hoping that one of the next few chapters reveals that she is pregnant!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
good but short

a very good story but could have been a bit more longer and build up a lil better but good story please more??????????

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Ok wtf

Y didnt he eat her slutty pussy and make her pussy sore from him sucking on it 4 a few hours

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Boring

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

No it good

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