All Comments on 'My Kimiko'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Please Continue!

Good start Amy, you are warming up, please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
go on

i like how u take ur time with it i hate when stories rush right to it.

grllvrgrllvrover 18 years ago
Great Start

A wonderful beginning, Amy. Don't follow the guys desire to rush things along. Let the story build. I look forward to the next installment.

grllvr

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Write Faster!!!

Fantastic start to an incredible story. Please write faster. I would love to know how this ends. You have a wonderful sense of erotic romance in your stories. Fantastic!! Write more. - Dana

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
please make them a couple!!

Don't make it a bi-curious sorta thing, make them girlfriends who fall in love!

Anonymous
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