All Comments on 'My Kinky Fiancé Slips Up'

being used and hurt continously. This is the type of girl you fuck then forget.

why do people get so angry about the stories?i liked this one but i take it for what it is a story maybe the guys that hate it but still read are a bit insecure or have dogs for wives!!!just remember it's only the writers fantasy.but i still can't understand the people who hate these storis still read them.lifes a funny old thing

You hit one of the best in this genre I've seen. In fact, the fact that its someone he knows and is sort of in competition with heightens the senses. Perhaps a series of Kelly's future "slip ups" would be fun.

Hey, whaddya know, more morons posting stupid comments about stories they never should've read in the first place! What a bunch of absolute dipshits.<p>

"What I don't understand is why anyone would want to marry a slut like her? She'll never be faithful!"<p>

No shit! He doesn't want her to be faithful, you idiot. She's so fucking hot that he wants to see her beauty, and share it, and show it off. He loves how she looks when she fucks. So does she. He knows it; she knows it. They're on the same page.<p>

At least he knows what he wants, and he's getting the very best of it.<p>

You idiots? You keep reading these stories and you keep jacking off to them. Then you complain about them, and you post retarded comments about them. But you never stop reading them; each and every one of them. You're far wimpier than these "cucksters," who at least have the balls to admit and pursue what they like. You guys are just limp dick cowards, hiding behind false moralizing and ersatz righteous indignation, even as you spank yourself stupid at the very idea of it.<p>

Come tomorrow, you'll be right back here again, looking for another batch of similar stories. Come tomorrow, you'll piss and moan and complain about them, and you'll ridicule the authors, but you'll keep eating your own cum as you read them.<p>

You people are fucking pathetic.<p>

Very well written story, Odeon.

I have a friend with a wife like her, she is a great fuck. It's like having 2 wives to screw, brilliant. Of course if my wife stepped out on me it would be all down hill for her, she knows she is mine. But you have to love those easy wives with cuckold husbands.

where the erotic should be in this story. a lot could have been really hot. what really spoilt the whole thing was not the problems the couple had. no it's how so called friends really just give a shit for a peace of ass or for the sensation that hopefully a couple would break apart. I hope you have better friends because the characters here aren't. This would be a shitty world to live in if you could trust nobody. just think of it, guys like this would fuck your 16 year old daughter just for the fun of hurting you and make her the youngest pornstar. hope you like that when it happens.

tell her that he wanted to see other people and end the relationship... but pretend he didn't really want to do that... just childish. Immature and a waste of time. Couldn't bother to read beyond that point. Don't waste your time writing about people that NO ONE cares to read about. I didn't like a single person in the story to that point... so, why would I care to read on?

Great writing. Loved it...Mancelt.

The story is great, definitely rates HOT. I think there are more than a few twits that vote down a story (after ignoring any hint of what is involved) because when they read it it isn't what they prefer. I don't know what the answer is to that. All I can say is that this one was good and I hope you keep it going with more than just the one sequel. The story is good, the characters as interesting as any in this genre, and the interloper(s) just as much arseholes as they should be.

Great story. Amazing writing. One of the best stories I've read on this site.

Simply stupid.

for Pauls allowances. TK U MLJ LV NV

In the middle, I thought this was going somewhere else. Ended stupidly. She's a slut, and he's just weird.

...but I am sure you will find your audience - mostly readers who sign as &quot;Anonymous&quot;..

Hey, i love your writing style. I hope to read more of the lovely kelly's slip-ups.

It is unsual to find a well written work on this site - maybe 4% of total

And fucked the straight guy whenever she got an itch. Uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh. Her husband likes dicks.

The premise is just too stupid for words. How is any of the concept of her slutting around and fucking behind his back or in front of him compatible to any degree with love or marriage??? If she's going to whore around, why bother marrying the cheap cunt? How can you possibly trust her in any other matters - be it family, money or even plain old honesty? It really is just too demoralizing to believe people like that exist in real life. Which further makes it impossible to 'suspend disbelief' for the purposes of the narrative.

Ignore these pathetic little men who have so clearly been burned by life. Your stories are rich and engaging your characters believable your sex scenes hot and psychologically thrilling. These assholes have either been cheated on or fancy themselves writers but flunked high school English

Let's get a sequel where Scottie returns

It's really well written- as your readers have come to expect- and erotic as all get-out. Your characters are well defined. I have to say though that Kelly isn't the only one in the story who's twelve years old- they all are. I enjoyed reading it immensely but I can't relate to any of these people at all. How the hell did you DO that? I suppose it's like reading National Geographic. I'm fascinated even though their way of life is as alien as if they came from Mars.

Wow. Long.

...And worth every word.

It was great!

you have a terrible habbit of telling us what happened instead of ahowing us.

I liked the story. I only wish the author had enlisted the services of a good editor. Maybe then, we wouldn't have instances of Kelly letting guys have "a peak" of her nude body instead of a peek. There were other typos as well that won't show up in spell check since they are not misspelled, they are just used incorrectly.

Cuck’s gotta cuck, and hoes gotta hoe.