All Comments on 'My Life's Playlist Ch. 01'

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inspirixisinspirixisabout 14 years ago
Exciting!

So excited you FINALLY decided to post this and hope you're getting some good feedback on it.

Of course I love this story but just one thing- I don't like where you left the chapter. I Always think it is best to leave the first chapter at a point where the reader is a little bit stressed out about what is about to come next. After reading this I feel kind of content. Sure, I hope she finds a nice man but she seems reasonably happy, no?

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