by worldhistorybuff
So excited you FINALLY decided to post this and hope you're getting some good feedback on it.
Of course I love this story but just one thing- I don't like where you left the chapter. I Always think it is best to leave the first chapter at a point where the reader is a little bit stressed out about what is about to come next. After reading this I feel kind of content. Sure, I hope she finds a nice man but she seems reasonably happy, no?