All Comments on 'My Little Devil'

A handful of small problems here and there but otherwise excellent. I hope to see more of your writing on here soon.

quite impressed actually like it which is rare. Written like an actual story not someones ravings of sexual need.

Stealthwolf$

*grins* would love to be the "lil devil"

ok, shadow has outdone herself. the image of those 2 beautiful creatures feasting on eachother is electric. i am unable to stop fantasizing that i am somehow in the story (and i can think of many roles i would love to play) but i won't insult shadow by putting them to paper, and claiming to be in the same league as she is.

HUH?

Whew... ok... cold shower time.

VERY well written! 8)

Keep up the good work!

Thanks!

Kyss this is a fantastic story. Give us some more!

As normal kyss continues amazing everyone with her beautifully written stories very sexy