by apple231601
I commented after the last chapter that I didn't feel the climactic orgy was as exciting as it could have been and I completely agree with your reply that it's hard to find new ways to describe sex when your writing is so explicit and the sex quotient is so high. So I'm happy to say that you definitely redeemed yourself in this final chapter; that "and fucked and fucked and fucked and fucked" paragraph was inspired, sexy and funny at the same time. You should be really proud of yourself, great work.
I accidentally hit 2 stars I meant to hit 5 sorry I love the series good job
Very nice. Perfectly written, the fantasy: amazing. Maybe a bit too much of the cocks sizes and all. But other than that, very nice!
Please with adventures of Tia & Oluth as they continue to explore this bizarre world. As the other harem members make cameo appearances from time to time.