by tinman69s
The kid should of just pushed his mom on bed fuck her cun inside her then get up walk out room treat as piece of meat
you need to label this shit as cuckold/humiliation so people can avoid it.
I didn't care much for this story either. If this were written where the characters were a bit more believable, it may have worked. The machismo of the men is a bit too harsh for the son to really care about his mother, and then the mother's reaction to her son also not very "motherly". Please view the criticism as constructive, as this story had the possibility of being VERY good with a bit more care, and a few tweeks in the storyline.
I think the boy should go on with his life and the mom and the daughter and jeremy will likely end up with hiv or some stds but i would like to read chapter 2
Pat Murray
Well isn't this the feel-good story of the year? What, with the happy ending and all. Everyone gets what they deserve.
When The Mon Left She Was Driving An Explorer When He Went looking For Her He Found Her BLAZER at his sisters house