All Comments on 'My Mother'

by Iowamaster

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
you wish

RIGHT, you cut the crotch out of a pair of pantyhose while she was wearing them, I THINK NOT!! At least TRY to keep the story believable.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
too many mistakes

No detail...no character development...totally unbelievable scene...and the 18 yr old lad has a 10' (that means 10 feet) dick. Are you writing about humans or blue whales???

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Waste of Time

This effort was a waste of time both for you and the reader. But then again, it wasn't much of an effort, was it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
rubber legs?

'I would rubber her legs and jack off.'

makes almost as much sense as your later line, 'she sucked my long and hard.'

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
try again

I think at the very least you need someone who knows how to read to proofread for you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
WASTE OF SPACE

As unbelievable as a story can be. Cutting her panty hose while she was wearing them is beyond ridiculous.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
You did an excellent job

of convincing me that:

1) you can't spell or write

and

2) you have no sexual experience beyond beating off you dick, which I have no doubt is much, much smaller than the 10 inches you fantasize about.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Detritus like this

shouldn't be published ..where are literotica's 'standards'?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
HUH?

5'5" and 170 lbs...thick thighs..."My Mother", right?...are you sure this wasn't a 4-H project?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
WOW

Give the writer a go,You all started somewhere at sometime yourselves

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
pantyhose

tell us about fucking her in her pantyhose and sexy girdle and cumming all over her satin girdle crotch

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