by Iowamaster
RIGHT, you cut the crotch out of a pair of pantyhose while she was wearing them, I THINK NOT!! At least TRY to keep the story believable.
No detail...no character development...totally unbelievable scene...and the 18 yr old lad has a 10' (that means 10 feet) dick. Are you writing about humans or blue whales???
This effort was a waste of time both for you and the reader. But then again, it wasn't much of an effort, was it.
'I would rubber her legs and jack off.'
makes almost as much sense as your later line, 'she sucked my long and hard.'
I think at the very least you need someone who knows how to read to proofread for you.
As unbelievable as a story can be. Cutting her panty hose while she was wearing them is beyond ridiculous.
of convincing me that:
1) you can't spell or write
and
2) you have no sexual experience beyond beating off you dick, which I have no doubt is much, much smaller than the 10 inches you fantasize about.
shouldn't be published ..where are literotica's 'standards'?
5'5" and 170 lbs...thick thighs..."My Mother", right?...are you sure this wasn't a 4-H project?
Give the writer a go,You all started somewhere at sometime yourselves
tell us about fucking her in her pantyhose and sexy girdle and cumming all over her satin girdle crotch