All Comments on 'My Naive Little Coworker'

Especially for a first submission --- really enjoyed it

I liked the playful build up leading to the time when it all happened. In my 50s I have to admit that as this story pointed out, "there's nothing like the passion of a younger woman."

Wow a great piece from a new writer it was really Erotic n spell binded narration. stirred up my paasion and my similiar memories

Nice as an older guy working in an office of hot women half my age I can so relate. Loved it

more if able knowing you're a lady.

Excellent lead up, especially her acting a feminist then being lead like a submissive.

Great job

Lee

Ha... I'm nearly 50 and a man, and had a vaguely similar escapade. This story captured those emotions exactly. Well done!

This was great. I like the angle you took, and the way it built up to the climax. The word choice was also perfect :) You should write more! Do you have any help?

...Great story except for calling her music "awful head banger music" when metal's amazingly raw and passionate. Get a life.

"get a life" comment, because somebody doesn't share your 'taste' in music. Classic idiot, right there.