All Comments on 'My Neighbor Jessica'

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ChevMan69ChevMan69over 15 years ago
Once a Lifetime

Well by golly, you had a once in a lifetime short lived fling that a lot of men will never experience. My hat is off to ya! Maybe you could have proof read a little to adjust some areas of writing but in general a rather good story to hold interest. Thanks.

oldtwitoldtwitabout 11 years ago
mmmmmm If only

What a good read, it did make me think "if only " it would happen to me, fat chance , but well put together, paced and thought out.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

she was keeping awful quiet about something. she was hiding something from you. better to leave her alone. sounds like she was a untrustworthy slut who liked your vehicle.no matter what money one makes, 55 thousand for a car is a ridiculous waste when people are starving. one day you may not have such a job. cars are wworshipping false image

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