All Comments on 'My New Lover Ch. 01'

so sensual! i half expected you to dive into her cleavage face first and lick off the sugar in front of everyone! you almost had me looking around to see who was watching! im not usually a fan of second person pov but this was well done!

I love how fearless both were, it was great! They were so into each other, it was like nobody else was there, it's the essence of true longing, perhaps even true love?

your story held my attention and left me wanting more, feeling the passion and adoration to the deepest depths of my heart. You have a gift, a talent, a way with words, that entices the imagination. Teasing and flaunting, leaving me wanting to dive right in and follow through with you in reality.

Boy that was hot ! It kept me wanting more and more.

That was just so beautifully erotic - absolutely stunning! 5* from me (and anyone else with an active pulse!)

I really can't wait for the next one!