All Comments on 'My New Phone'

and a nice way to end the day.

g'night.

Great story! Kept my attention all the way through. By the way could you give her my phone number? PLEASE!

take out the "; her words rocked me to the core." you steal your own punchline.

good story, i liked it.

Great depiction of sex. Not violent, but just forceful enough.

I particularly liked the blindfold. That added to it. Although I was able to reason that it wasn't Mel who was doing the deed, I found the story still very able to hold my attention.

The ending was great - everything revealed in the last 2 paragraphs. If the last paragraphs could be paraphrased into baseball lingo...it was a curve ball that started at the eyeballs and ended up at the shoe laces.

Keep up the good work!

Wow what fun