All Comments on 'My New Sex Life Ch. 01'

He lines up his stiff cock to my drenched whole - should be hole

Nicely done!

Did you really have to use cunt? It just took a lot away from an otherwise good story, be careful of the use of words, whole, hole etc, spell check won't pick up things like that.

You need to use spelling and grammar check - use one of the volunteer editors the site offers -

Dude read these tips and learn from them, the structure was off , bad grammar and it was rushed, didn't make much sense "I'm going to cum" "that right come for me" seriously ? Is that really what you say during sex? Learn how to right please