All Comments on 'My Obsession with Jade'

by CAP811

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Strong Story

I prefer happy endings... but this was very well done, and probably more true to life than a happy ending. BRAVO

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Sad but still very erotic and good.

Things like this do happen to people. Sad but true.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Sad but true, I can picture the last dollar

as he hands it over thinking he is somehow different. You paint a vivid scene. Thanks. -- UK CYNIC

MichaelphyteMichaelphyteover 14 years ago
YES, it happened to me

I am not planing to write my story, but I might someday. I was in the Navy, stationed in Saratoga Springs NY for 6 months,and found my first true love.

When I was transferred out I was heartbroken that she was still waiting for her lover, a marred man I never met !

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Well done!

A very well-written story. It has a realistic feel. One can easily envision a young man falling head over heels for someone like Jade. And your description of Jade also seems realistic. Now I'm looking forward to reading some of your other stories!

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