by CAP811
I prefer happy endings... but this was very well done, and probably more true to life than a happy ending. BRAVO
Things like this do happen to people. Sad but true.
as he hands it over thinking he is somehow different. You paint a vivid scene. Thanks. -- UK CYNIC
I am not planing to write my story, but I might someday. I was in the Navy, stationed in Saratoga Springs NY for 6 months,and found my first true love.
When I was transferred out I was heartbroken that she was still waiting for her lover, a marred man I never met !
A very well-written story. It has a realistic feel. One can easily envision a young man falling head over heels for someone like Jade. And your description of Jade also seems realistic. Now I'm looking forward to reading some of your other stories!