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Click hereElizabeth's vocal tone had suddenly changed from sweet and syrupy to serious and stressed. "Heads up, Roberts, we may be in for spot of trouble!"
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Nursesabout 1 year agoI like stories with an actual storyline. Would love to see some of your stories as audiobooks on Chirp. Chirp is how I listen to books on my phone.
Anonymousover 1 year agoGet an editor. Also everything doesn't have to tie back to ESU directly, smart people go to many different Universities. Don't make up easily verifiable facts to make ESU sound more important.
But the story is good as a whole, the more I read the less I care about the sex.
Cruzhurtalmost 3 years agoMost of the comments are from years ago, so it isn’t likely the author even cares or reads them at this point, but I am seriously disappointed that after all the discussion about how Peggy wasn’t interested in women AT ALL, that you found it necessary to put her into a scenario where she’s forced to eat Elizabeth’s pussy. It is the equivalent Suzanne or Lara having Robbie be fellated by a guy, then forced to suck said guy off, and find that he enjoys it immensely. Why take the effort of establishing Peggy’s lack of interest in females and then stick her in that position? There are enough characters in this story who would be amenable to that scenario without compromising Peggy’s obvious aversion to that. Character development has to mean something, and “forcing” that upon her is disrespectful at best, and misogynistic at worst. Only possible motivation is that experience will make it easier for Peggy to move on from Robbie. Unless he moves to a country where polygamy is legal, he can only marry one woman. Neither Lara, nor Nora seem to be the kind to want to share, once children are involved. Their intelligence, wealth, and accomplishments alone mean they wouldn’t need to settle once they have borne out their “wild” phase.
Jackspeed2uabout 3 years agoPlease don’t fuck it all up by taking another dick Suzanne!
So we missy keep Lara, absolute must. Nora also seem like a must as well. That leaves Suzanne as an outlier at the moment as she isn’t committing to Robbie like the others. She might just find that the bed is full by the time she figures her shit out.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoAs I've read the past two or three chapters, it has occurred to me that you submit stories under multiple accounts. Nothing wrong with that, of course.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoKeep the toons, development of the plot, tone down the sex, get an editor, and this is a gold mine.
Anonymousover 9 years agoI just marked it and comment appropriately ! (past experience of this writer)
shadowkt17over 9 years agoI like how people comment on how terrible a story is, yet they still read all of it!
Positive feedback is appreciated!
Anonymousabout 10 years ago...in every possible interpretation of that statement :D
Anonymousabout 10 years agoI know it's literotica and all, but I follow the story for the story itself. It's a great one and hope for it to continue for a long time.
fanfareabout 10 years agoConan, it was interesting showing how the Arabs managed to ensnare so many Western businessmen. Though none top the blackmail by Saudi Intelligence of the Cheney/Bush gang starting back in the 1970's. Until today we are tightly caught in the Royal Saudi web. That the neo-pseudo-conservatives (dixiecrats pretending to be republicans) have trapped us into fighting the Arab tribes millennia long war against the Turk/Iranian tribes.
Now back in the seventies, I did not correctly project how imminent was the collapse of the Soviet Union. I expected that to occur in the next generation, closer to around the turn of the century. A very pleasant surprise that it happened early. Best kind of mistake to make. I think I failed to factor in how deep the corruption was.
Now my projections are for the Saudi Royal kleptocracy is their collapse sometime by the end of the this century. Hopefully I will turn out to have been too conservative in my projections again and their well deserved extermination will occur much sooner. A second treat if it was in my lifetime! Unfortunately by then we will have brutalized the Turk/Iranians into an implacable foe. Hey, my suggestion of nuclear strikes, looking better all the time? Before they have the capability to retaliate. Hint, hint.
conantheabout 10 years agoAuthorTrying to get better with each episode, but very busy with travel right now. The story will continue all through his freshman year and beyond.
