by Ameaner
WAS GREAT (incl. CHP.11). GOOD STUFF. JUST WHAT I WANTED. THANKS FOR LISTENING.
-alain
It just keeps getting better! This is one fantastic tale.
Next chapters please What will be next?
I like the mix of the unknown and incomprehendable power that his mother and grandmother has, and still very erotic and sexually invigorating to read.
I have given up trying to figure out where this story is going, and I'm at the author's mercy to inform us in the style he has shown as where he will take us.
Thanks for the good chapter.
As I said before, tihs is getting even more convoluted. After all this chapters, it's turning out as quite an original story, with all its twists and turns. Nice work!
This Narcissistic idiot should stop worrying
abut his own little secrets and start worrying
about where and what and most importantly
"how many who's" his mother has been doing
every day.
Then she comes home late and plays
the perfect girlfriend. Yeah right....
In the incest category, I can count on the fingers of one hand (perhaps two) some very fine really original stories. Ones that, as a reader I found truly memorable. The authors know who they are and astute readers will remember how enchanted we all were as our greedy selves lustfully anticipated and received chapter after chapter.
But this story... This story has many more elements to it than my twitching fingers remember of the others... Elements which many comments have picked up on and how differentiated they are and yet so convolutedly strung together. The known is that it is sex, sex, sex, and very erotic taboo sex at that.
Perhaps the greatest mystery of all is Ameaner himself and how he's going to keep us panting for more as his tale unwinds, adding here or there as he wills it, explaining without explaining this or that... until...
Well I don't know... and for me, that's perhaps the greatest fun of all about this allegory. So Ameaner, where are you going to take the characters and us next? The ride is fun and you continue to have my rapt interest in what I think is a truly great story so far. Again, five stars.
Most of the stories on this site are wham...bam...thank you ma'am. This multi-part story goes well above and beyond the usual strokes. 5 stars for sure. Keep it up. I can't wait until the Jedi granny gets defeated by the light side of the force.
Yet good doesn't always prevail so I would hope you'll grant the proponent in this story some grace if he should fail.
Love the sex part between them. Hate the part about him and his grandma Marie. At times, I don't know why you even brought her up. Steven has so much on his plate now, how are you going to resolve them all?
Keep it up just like Steven did in is mums arse got a great hard on once again reading this disguasting and greatverotic story another five stars from me
Consciously and unconsciously, the son wanted to please his mother in every way she wanted and expected. They gave each other everything eacy other wanted and/or needed without self-loathing, self-recrimination, guilt, shame or remorse. They needed and wanted to display their unconditional love to each other in the most intimant ways possible.