All Comments on 'My Own Body: Slowly'

It didn't work out for Gayle Newland.

...still flawless. Your abilities still amaze me. I loved this. I liked Ashleigh's last line, it held a sort of impact while somehow creating a cliffhanger. Nice. I look forward to more.

You are walking around on thin ice but are doing an excellent job. What goes on inside a brain is the most difficult thing to describe. Good work and thanks.

This tale gets more and more interesting!