All Comments on 'My Philippine Vacation Ch. 01'

(Author's comments)

After years of reading, I've finally gotten around to writing and submitting my own story. Please let me know what you thought of my work in progress. It's my first time writing erotica, so any and all comments about what you liked, didn't like, and what you would like to see would be very much appreciated. =)

-NWC

been there and enjoyed that...but now you have to give us act 2. Mike from Texas

Continue please

now want story ch 2

Unbelievable ...cruel as he'll.