All Comments on 'My Photogenic Mom Ch. 01'

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mugglensumugglensuover 9 years ago
Great start

Please don't rush and muck it up. You are a good writer !

BG187BG187over 9 years ago
Why did you stop!!!

OMG please continue to write this I love how it's going already. I'll be waiting and watching for the next chapter!!

5 stars easy!

GuardRail08GuardRail08over 9 years ago
Plagiarism

Story is from xnxx.com and is the full story there not 1/3rd as here. Full story available at xnxx.com

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Plagiarism?

its the same author.......

Epiphany_JonesEpiphany_Jonesover 9 years ago
In this case, who cares if it's copied or original? It still sucks.

It violates the age limit for minors, it wanders all over the place, and it reads like it was written by ...a sixteen year old who can't write very well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Under-age Sexual Activity?

This story contains a scene in which the narrator (Michael) - at age 12 - raids his mother's underwear drawer, is nearly caught, and hides in a closet when his mother enters the bedroom. From the closet, he watches as his mother masturbates, and eventually joins in the masturbation, himself.

Literotica's submission guidelines specifically state that, "No sexual activity involving bestiality (you can write stories about supernatural beasts like ghosts, unicorns, werewolves, etc.) or underage persons will be considered."

Seems to me that "masturbation" is a sexual activity, especially when it is being done while staring at a naked woman who is also masturbating.

Let's face it - this story has already proceeded SO far downhill that getting a rating of even a "1" would require it to go back up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
How long ago did this story take place...

... that the doofus main character can still find FILM for his camera?

gotranegotraneover 9 years ago
F Is For Fantasy!

As a program reminder, we must remember that these stories are fantasies. Personally, I enjoyed it, and would want to see more, especially, at least, a sequel to this one!

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayover 9 years ago
I however liked it

Ok he was 12 and feeling moms panties, what 12 year old boy hasn't felt mom's or sisters panties at one time? As for jacking off watching mom that might have went too far but does it come under underage sex? Is jacking off sex? Hell today they don't even think a blowjob is sex thanks to Clinton, most school girls don't think anything of giving handjobs or blowjobs since it's not fucking it's not sex they say.

Anyway good story so far and I would to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Let's get real!

Sexual feelings don't wait eighteen years to surface. Why don't we face that fact and share experiences as they really happen. Love the story, be it fact or fantasy. Would love to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More, please.

Ignore negative comments. Share your story. More, please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

waiting for the following chapter(s) -

harlyquinharlyquinover 9 years ago
term and conditions

Good story. I agree that the ban on materials depicting characters under 18 in sexually explicit situations is a grey area morally. These aren't exploited children suffering trauma at the hands of their caretakers; they are figments of your imagination. many cultures, however, seem to draw the line on their slippery slope argument regarding child pornography pretty far back. That seems to include this website.

Edit the ages or your story might get deleted.

muskyboymuskyboyalmost 2 years ago

No dialogue, at all. FTDS.

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