by GoddessKaren
Thank you for writing such an eloquent quickie. Great work! I'll have to check out your other pieces.
I'm surprised by this story - your sex scenes are as hot as anyone could ask for, but there's absolutely no premise, no buildup, no real characters to speak of. It started out promisingly, but I wanted to quit reading at the "I can't sleep because..." paragraph, particularly when her 38DDD breasts had to be mentioned. A little more introduction and seduction would be nice before the fiery love-makin'.