All Comments on 'My Professor Ch. 01'

by GoddessKaren

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Ms.RotfeuerMs.Rotfeuerabout 15 years ago
Short and Sweet!

Thank you for writing such an eloquent quickie. Great work! I'll have to check out your other pieces.

ChickpeaAlphaChickpeaAlphaover 14 years ago
Disappointed...?

I'm surprised by this story - your sex scenes are as hot as anyone could ask for, but there's absolutely no premise, no buildup, no real characters to speak of. It started out promisingly, but I wanted to quit reading at the "I can't sleep because..." paragraph, particularly when her 38DDD breasts had to be mentioned. A little more introduction and seduction would be nice before the fiery love-makin'.

bluerosenybluerosenyover 11 years ago
tease lol

Amazing story. too bad no chapter 2

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