All Comments on 'My Rude Roommate'

Naah, sounds to restrictive and samey, just keep switching characters

Not sure if anyone reads these stories beyond the first few days, Occurred to me I might be able to make this more of a series, where Bobby gets into the local goth / fetish / bondage scene with the local group of like minded girls. If anyone would like to see that, let me know and I'll try ot sort something out.

I really liked this! I hope you write more of it!

I liked it is good has a nice feel, I like the idea of bobby sweating the law ,

, pushing the fabric of her lacy black panties partially into her cunt. My cock needed virtually no help in pulling these aside and right away I was inside her, right up to the hilt and pummelling her hard.

You might omit or change virtually it is not theright word.

I got there at a different reception. < I got there to a different reception.>

Keep the non-concent theme but get into it more. Develope it, make it longer. You have a good thing going.

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