All Comments on 'My Sacrifice to Womankind'

But sounds like great fun!

I got bored so I started fapping but this story was so nasty I puked right before I was gonna cum. Ew.

you are such a great writer -love your stories

Love your story. Will definitely check out your work written as hylyfe.

I enjoyed reading it and there are some good ideas, particularly the ending, where our poor toilet decides to make his escape. It made me want to read more. I also enjoyed the utter degradation of it all.

However, it's not particularly well written, with numerous spelling errors, poor character depictions and slightly lacklustre dialogue, which didn't quite work. Perhaps I'm being unfairly critical, however I'm trying to offer contructive advice.

Having said that, I would like to read more from this author.

hope he dies

nebylo to sice profesionální, ale jako amater autor, se to dalo číst. Ovšem jso utu daleko lepší příběhy na toaletního otroka. Za mě 3. Když budu známkovat jako ve škole.