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Click hereSo tonight it's the pit while I still have the strength to swim; I believe it will lead to freedom. I don't believe my goddess when she says it flows into a sink hole. Maybe the others all escaped. In a few hours my fate will be sealed. In the mean time the bell is ringing and I must answer its call.
- COMMENTS
scatfacesittingover 1 year agonebylo to sice profesionální, ale jako amater autor, se to dalo číst. Ovšem jso utu daleko lepší příběhy na toaletního otroka. Za mě 3. Když budu známkovat jako ve škole.
LuckyToiletover 8 years agoI enjoyed reading it and there are some good ideas, particularly the ending, where our poor toilet decides to make his escape. It made me want to read more. I also enjoyed the utter degradation of it all.
However, it's not particularly well written, with numerous spelling errors, poor character depictions and slightly lacklustre dialogue, which didn't quite work. Perhaps I'm being unfairly critical, however I'm trying to offer contructive advice.
Having said that, I would like to read more from this author.
Nick_Niceabout 9 years agoLove your story. Will definitely check out your work written as hylyfe.
