All Comments on 'My Saving Grace Ch. 03'

by Michael10166

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HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenover 7 years ago
Great story, up to this point

But you need to finish it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Hyphens

Please. Please stop. There's unnecessary hyphens everywhere. Clos-ing? Why? :/ It could be a good story but it's really short, there's a few spelling errors, and the fucking hyphens are annoying.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Soooo good please write more fast!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

brilliant please write more hope next chapter is a little longer

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
please write more

please post another chapter. great. longer is better!

chytownchytownover 12 years ago
A Little Slow.

But getting interesting. Please continue thanks for sharing.

KathyFKathyFover 12 years ago
Very Nice Continuation

You Are Developing This Very Well. I'm Very

Happy To Read A Story Of A Developing Love

vs. A Mad (Lesbian) Sex Filled That

Has No Characters Or Feelings.

Thank You

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Please keep writing.. want to know how the date goes

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