All Comments on 'My Second Nightmare'

... should have taken a Louiseville slugger to the assholes knees while he was asleep and thrown her ass out with him. The best thing this pussy could do is eat a gun an make the world a better place.

With a woman like that bringing a kid up, I'm surprised he could even wipe his own ass. There's only one villain in this story, the bitch that spread her legs to squirt him out.

I really wished that something would have happened to Alec...like him getting arrested for drug possession with intent to sell. Then he could have had all the sex he wanted...in prison...lol

I give you 5 Stars, but really is a 4 1/2 due to Alec not getting any retribution.

Did not like this story at all.

Davis was the only human character, all the rest were cardboard cutouts made to fit the plot.

normal i give your stories 5* but this is rated much lower.

I kept waiting for the protagonist to ask his mother the most obvious questions.

So mom, what you are saying is, It is so much more painful for Jenny, that I won't talk to her, than it was for me when she betrayed me?

They say you can't choose your family. But you can choose whether you associate with them. You don't need people in your life, family or others, who don't have your best interests at heart. His mother didn't love or respect him, anymore than Jenny did. Perhaps he chose Jenny because of the role model that his mother created. But the mistake of birth, isn't irrevocable. He's not a minor. And he doesn't need her in his life.

Robert

just wait a sec, and and more to follow...Wake up. TK U MLJ LV NV

I don't remember reading where they, Jenny and him were ever divorced. Early in the story he decided not to file, to let her pay the fees, so he is still bound up by that, unless I missed something.

3*

He is a black-belt in karate but when he walks in on his wife and her lover he does nothing. He even stays to talk with her after what a fucking wimp, no wonder he had such a hard time getting over her. The anger shown in the bedroom shrine was lame, so he threw some things around and broke some candles when no one was there, big deal. Alec was right about him, he was the weak lame cuckold husband that would do nothing. I can't really see any woman finding his weakness and insecurity attractive unless they are looking for a man they could cuckold.

You have such a way of making the emotions of your characters feel so real.

Maybe, MAYBE, if Jenny had come to him first, told him she had met someone and was falling in love, and got at least a separation if not a divorce before sleeping with the other guy, there MIGHT be some hope.

But cheating and coldly dumping leave no room for forgiveness.

great story very well written. you can easily see how his wife could do all of that with no thought of how it affected him. glad that at the end he finally came out ahead of all the hurt he had going on him. keep writing

Why do married women, who have affairs, insist on doing so in the same house or apartment, they share with their husbands. Are women totally ignorant of the concept, "you don't shit where you eat!"

Umm, men do that shit too. Don't let this site fool you. There have been plenty of women who have come home and got the "it's just sex" speech.

But Jesus! Could he have been ANY dumber? And to end up with Angie? You have GOT to be kidding! She's a close friend to Jenny. Nothing will change that relationship. You want a constant reminder of Jenny? Hang out with Angie! He picked two bat-shit crazy women. And you had him go from one to the other. That ranks right up there with the most ridiculous thing ever. Now I understand that this is fiction. That little green men could fly down and take him away. But this was simply a terrible ending.

let's take your question and premise one step further. IF, she had come to him and asked for a separation, telling him she was falling for Alec, and he said OK,

she then "explored" and discovered

"But with Alec, it's...it's magical! He's exciting, and wild, and unpredictable. Every moment feels like a roller-coaster ride. I've never felt this way in my life before."

"Nick, I have to be with him. I'm so sorry."

What then?

and/or

when she left, he saw an attorney, had her served, and moved on instead of deciding to live in a self imposed limbo?

either way, she chose Alec over her husband, It wasn't until the player left the playing field that she had her wtf have I done moment.

Good story but two pages too long. Too many tedious phone calls and messages. A wimp for his failure to deck the guy or toss her out, but at least he wasn't a cuck. Four Stars.

BUT I DISAGREE WITH A COMMENT MADE THAT SHE WAS STILL JENNYS FRIEND IF YOU WERE PAYING ATTENTION AFTER SHE STOPPED THE SUDECTION ON HIM JENNY CAME OVER AND WAS ASKING IF THEY WERE DATING(HE AND ANGIE) BECAUSE SHE HAD NOT BEEN RETURNING JENNYS CALLS OR HAD ANY CONTACT WITH HER. SO NO ANGIE WANTED HIM AND TO HELL WITH JENNY AND HE SHOULD CHANGE HIS PHONE NUMBER AND NOT GIVE IT TO HIS MOTHER. GOOD STORY

OK HOW ABOUT A SEQUEL ABOUT NICK AND ANGIE BUT YOU WILL PROBABLY BLOW ME OFF ON THAT.

RON TEXAS cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

Couldn't imagine it being better, characters, plot, conflict, drama, dialog...all superb

Chilley

Only thing missing was someone getting the crapolla kicked out of them.

Really good tale.

The story is incomplete until Alec gets what he deserves.

Good story and fuck Alex

while the two in bed getting ready to jell. TK U MLJ LV NV

there will be a 4th

I mean, she's Jenny's best friend so, she had to know what was going on at the time. I mean, most friends would have discouraged Jenny from the affair in the first place. And failing that would have at least given Nick some clue that his marriage was in trouble. Not outright tell him (because of ''Girlcode'' or whatever) but, she could have at least encouraged him to take Jenny out to lunch more often, or to go on trip, so she would have less time to spend with the guy. And another thing, if she cared about Nick at all, why did it take the eight months until Jenny begged her to seduce him, for her to find out how he was going. She claimed to be his friend also, but she didn't even call the guy to see how he was holding up after Jenny left him. In my opinion Angie is just as bad as Jenny. Any person with at least a little morality in there character would have turned Jenny down flat when asked to seduce Nick. And tried to show Jenny that she had already put Nick through enough heartache and help her try to get on with her life. Instead she makes the guy fall for her, then dumps him without a proper explanation, just like Jenny, until he has to force it out of her. All of her actions or in-actions lead me to believe that Angie doesn't have a problem with the things that Jenny did to Nick.

What he SHOULD have done was throw her out of the house naked!

“and that she'd attributed the dullness of routine to me,” – Of course, SHE’S always light and excitement, right?

If he DID have an affair, with Angie or someone else, they are SEPARATED now, there is NO equivalence! And she did more than “just” have an affair – she told him to his face that for all practical purposes she didn’t love him anymore, that ALEC was the “love of her life”!

Almost everyone in this story felt some pain, of varying degrees. But, the one person who was the catalyst for the entire situation walked away unscathed. Alec the asshole played his games, got some great sex, and then walked away free to pursue his next victim. He should have either gotten his ass kicked (why else was there the inclusion of the karate training?), or he should have been burned professionally and socially. Even better would have been to do both! That's far better than letting him think that what he did was acceptable.

Couldn’t she tell him about it, and move out, BEFORE she fucks “Alec” in THEIR bed?!

He said it himself, when it came right down to it Angie couldn’t do it to him, and was honest with him, even when it made her look bad.

wow, can you write one fucking story with a man that has some self respect. why does every male have to be a pussy. hell he couldnt stand up to any women in the whole story. he even had to have his boyfriend hold his hand while he talked to his cheating ex wife. he shouldve just told her the truth. he is gay and is more interested in sucking davis's dick than her.

I think you should give up trying to write from the male point of view. Nick is a little pussy. It was excruciating listening to him cry like a girl. I have never liked a non willing cuck story less. I read the whole fucking piece of shit thinking "he's a black belt. He's going to kick Alec's ass" but no, he's a wimp all the way to the fizzled out end. What a waste of time.

After she left me much like Jenny did with Alec. Not quite as elaborate, but yes, it was true love, yada yada yada. I was so sick I spent about a week puking and with the shits, just like I had an actual virus or bacterial infection. I didn't file for divorce, I couldn't bring myself to even think about her or a divorce, it would bring up everything I had eaten. You see, she was not just the girl of my dreams, she was the little red haired neighbor girl I had grown up with and thought I knew as well as myself.

Unfortunately I didn't have a buddy to back me up like Nick did. No, my buddy swept my wife off her feet while I was at work. She moved out and in with Bill where after the newness started wearing off, his knuckles began to wear too, from punching her. The first few times she didn't report it, the last time she was transported via ambulance, making a report mandatory. Unfortunately the police called her husband, still me and didn't take it kindly when I laughed and told them to tell my wife to fuck off and die, I didn't give a shit. A few hours at the local precinct and I finally had my arresting officer understanding. Thankfully, he'd went through a cheating spouse too.

She seemed devastated when I didn't go see her in the hospital. But like an asshole, I was there to give her a ride home. On the ride home she tried to kiss me and explain about the biggest mistake she'd ever made and I agreed, it was truly her biggest mistake. When I pulled up, she sat in shock and began whispering to me, what was I doing? I got out, grabbed her bag and helped her to her door and delivered her home, to Bill. You see, she chose someone else, not me. I truly took her home. I'll admit, I expected the asshole was still in jail and I was a bit taken back. But I smiled and waved when I left her there, closing the door behind me.

Her dad was furious and caught me off guard when I heard the knock on my door. His fist hit me in the chin before I realized who was even there. Laying on the floor, looking up at old Frank, who stood with his feet wide and fists clenched, waiting for me to stand, I started to laugh. That infuriated him even further. When I saw he wasn't going to let me up without another punch, I did what any self respecting man would do. Standing over me it was so easy and I simply brought my foot up hard enough to damn near crush his family jewels. He collapsed and I stood.

After we had a good talk, I helped him to his car. Frank apologized and said he'd keep Bobbi Sue away, she had called him after she took a couple punches from Bill and ran. She was at his house with a rapidly swelling eye and chin, Bill was back being processed through to his old cell. Frank promised to explain to Bobbi Sue we were done, her home was no longer where I lived.

She began to call, perhaps a dozen times each day until I changed my number. Then she found my number and began calling that. When I dumped my phone and simply bought a burner phone, she began camping out in front of my house. Without a way to access it, she had to stay outside unless she planned to break and enter. After I'd had enough of her, I decided to torture her. I took our/my laptop to the front porch and sat with her, scrolling through all of our pictures together, remembering old times. The I deleted them all after setting them up, with one keystroke. She went bugnuts/ballistic when she realized they were gone forever. The only hard copies were what were in my house. She left in tears, I guess I had dangled a carrot and then swatted her with a 2x4, and it was a beautiful thing.

The next time she came over I was prepared. I hung out the kitchen window where she couldn't reach me and began setting our wedding photo's on fire, one at a time. I'd let them start burning good and then toss them to her, watching her attempt to put them out and save what she could. Some great blisters were earned that way! The kicker was when she watched me pull out wedding photo out of the frame that hung in the living room. She was screaming and crying to the point the police were called, while I grinned at her and kept waving the cigarette lighter around. When I had tortured her long enough, I lit it and tossed it to her when there was no chance of saving any part of it. The police came about that time and I had to explain again but since I had broke no law, they couldn't even give me a warning.

That was 4 years ago and we're still married. I know, I should nut up and do it, but she broke my heart and while I've healed, I still feel like payback. To dangle our marriage over her head is like clubbing a baby seal, it's just easy and so satisfying.

I liked the writing and story premise but hated the characters. The cheating bitch wife was just shallow and had an itchy cunt that seemed anyone could scratch. He was stupidly obsessive. No guy could still have feelings for someone after what she did. He let the guy get dressed and walk out without saying or doing anything? And then he kindly leaves to give her time to gather her stuff? I hated this guy more than the fucker and fuckee. The fucker beats her and then walks away! He needed to loose at least his balls, if not half his cock along with them. His friend was not much of a friend if he didn't take care of the fucker for him. And has the exhubby ever heard of a restraining order?

Black Belt Karate Expert needs to trade in his black belt for a pair of pink panties or a chastity cage for his nonfunctional cock.

why cant you move along without me/ TK U MLJ LV NV

our hero the black belt was just too much of a pussy to stand up for himself. Once again the seducer, this story Alec, walked away whistling dixie, whilst the cuckold threw a wobbler.

Bullfrog

Still five stars. Still love it.

His to-do list should have read

1. Grow a pair

2. Tell Mom to piss off. Seriously. When you are in the right, and your own parent sides against you, that relationship is too toxic to maintain.

3. Tell Jenny to piss off.

Really, not one of your good stories.

Are there people THIS whipped over the age of consent ?

I was genuinely infatuated with a girl -- IN HIGHSCHOOL -- and put up with stupid crap from her, that I'd be embarrassed to recount now. But I was seventeen.

By age 20 I was over that. Been married to my equal partner for almost 30 years now, in part because neither of us will take "deal-breaker" crap from the other. Lots of give and take, but not crap.

Who gives a shit about poor little wimpy's hurt feelings. When he found Alec in bed with his Jenny (Forrest Gump comes to mind) he would have been well within his rights (Temporary insanity) to re-position Alec's balls into his throat using the pointy end of his shoe,and bitch-slapping that unfaithful cunt of a wife 3 feet into the air!

- He needed to set his bitch of a mother straight! No wonder he was a wimp,growing up with an aggressive,disloyal,bitchy mother thoroughly dominating him.

- And that dufuss friend! He probably never dated Angie when he had the chance because he was an anti-social fag!

= Not holding my breath waiting for this to be released as a Lifetime Channel movie!

"entertaining myself by stroking her ass, most of which was easily available on either side of her thong panties" - What happened to her tights?

"Nick, I'm...I...I'm so sorry, I just...can't, I can't do this." - Hell, YOU'RE the one who started it! It's not like HE seduced YOU!

As I said before, there would have been NO equivalence between any affair he might have had with Angie and what Jennie did! They are SEPARATED! Maybe not a "legal" separation, but still.

That was absolutely one of the best LW stories....ever! Great story, great main and supporting characters, and pretty funny in just the right spots. Got me invested.

A couple of very minor sentence or word glitches, but still extremely well executed.

5 stars, well deserved.

But still enjoyed the story.

5*

That's nice! The protagonist knows karate. Oh look! The guy learnt karate. Oh my god! He's a black belt in karate. Wow! He competes in karate competitions. Mon dieu! He knows karate! Dios mio! Karate is known by the guy! Mein gott! Karate guy!

See what I did there?

who then turns out to be stupid and shallow and ignorantly cruel, but the husband never discerns that he's married to a psychopath. Its like having a beautiful toasted luscious smelling pie placed in front of you, but when you slice it open you find it full of putrid fish and cat shit. Kind of hard to imagine that much dichotomy in one person, that can't be discerned over the course of years of dating and living together.

So it was just too much of a stretch. But thanks for the effort.

You don't have to burn the bitch. You don't have to reconcile. But an adult should have a spine to decide what they want, and to enforce it. Only children allow infatuation to rule their lives.

Wife/Ex-wife stepped all over him. Check

Deceitful, treacherous mom stepped all over him, and he permits it. Check

Angie stepped all over him. Check. And he takes her back. Check.

What an passive, invertebrate slug. He deserves Angie, another lying POS like his ex.

Now Davis, he could use a story of his own.

Holy shmitt, do you and I have the same mother? Actually he was too nice to his stupid ignorant naive meddling mother (no wonder dad was dead already).

I flat laid the law down on my mom about meddling in my life - we did not talk/visit for over 7yrs. and I do not feel bad out it either. I gave mom a choice - bug out or else but she new more and better than me - even after I survived Vietnam, divorce, & 10yrs active military - her daily TV soaps educated her on what real life is all about.

Not get past the second page. You must hate men. You write men with no living brain cells.

Wow! My guts were locked-up and churning from the first page. That was like experiencing emotional torture, a knife cutting through the heart without any pain-numbing drugs! Having only had one wife who I loved with all my heart dump me after 18 years of marriage like so much garbage, I can totally relate to his feelings, except add a couple of more decades of thinking you had a happy marriage before the declaration in unyielding terms that the marriage is over and you ruined her life and killed her love for you!!!

Still haven't recovered after another 18 years... Loved the happy ending that made the agony worth the hope of joy at the end. Where's my Angie??? Still hoping the nightmare ends before my heart gives out...

But you seem to have some issues with women. Have to confess I've got a few of those stories in me too. They've kept me from finishing one for a year.

this is rare as hens teeth .

ohio didnt cuck for once . i better buy a lotto ticket .

5*

thats a first .

The epitome of a selfish bitch.

No words!

Was good but wtf kind of man stays passive to his disgusting mother. She is a vile creature who chose a cheating whore over her own son. Didn't make sense considering he WASN'T a passive bloke. But overall rather good.

he fell for a girl who was willing to f@ck for the purpose of deception? Isn't that special.

Sucks a green donkey dick. Wimp husband, stupid as shit wife, interfering mother. The only one with a decent reaction was Davis.

You really need to stop taking those drugs. green donkey dick? And you seen them!!! WOW you're worst that your dead ex wife of a whore.

Vote 1* for 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐅𝐀𝐓 𝐃𝐔𝐌𝐁 𝐓𝐑𝐀𝐍𝐍𝐘 𝐖𝐇𝐎𝐑𝐄™ (that's what her clients call her) aka BONNIE/VASTIE aka NEEDYOU200 aka 5+ANNONY!

Three manipulative whores and a dumb wimp.

Stupidity abounds. Cheating cunt thought she could get hubby back by having her friend seduce him so she could claim they were even. Small problem. She wasn't as stupid. Just smart enough to land the husband as her own. Now the whore is just that, plying her trade in the big city for drug money. A good ending if I say so myself.

Five Stars

Don't you hate it when a comment starts out like that. As I read your story and then the comment's. I decided to say something also. I started reading your stories from A to M so far.

I can understand why Nick stood looking dumbfounded at Jenny and Alec in bed, shock is a strange occurrence. I understand his reluctance to file for divorce as that is a finality most people don't want to think about. Nick's Mom did what any Mom would do if they cared for their daughter-in-law. Davis and Angie just acted like friends.

I would like to have seen in your story that if Jenny really cared and wanted to get back together she had filed for divorce and then begged for court ordered counseling. They might have found a way to ended it better.

No matter what the outcome Nick should have checked out what was going on with Jenny and found a time for pay back on Alec (he just laid there and smirked) no one should be allowed to skate after that. In all the stories on this site we all know if the asshole wants to spend the night in the husbands bed its just to mark territory.

Ohio it has been long enough, how about a follow up.

nope, too much dumb fuckers in this story.

If Angie is that attractive why did she not have a boyfriend and why did he get arsehole at her for being honest.

If Ohio would have written what you suggested then we'd have had the same old Loving story, (she cheated, they divorced, they do counseling, he gets revenge, etc,) instead of this really original story.

There are many story like the one you suggested, but only a ffew of them break that pattern and give us something worth reading.

The guy was too much of a pussy for my taste. He might have loved the Jenny that he married but the clueless whore that took her place and started fucking around didn't deserve shit. And he just left the asshole fucking his wife alone? Fuck that. Even if he wasn't getting back together with her, the asshole deserved at least a late night beating. He just seemed to want to cry over her. Sounds like he was having his period.

If he is that good at karate ,why didn't is kick the shit out of Alec.?

is they have a tendency to return, uninvited, TK U MLJ LV NV

How about the part 2 now he's demented locked in a padded room somewhere.

He was already a pussy now he's a bigger pussy. To bad there are only two women in all of Dayton Oh., but then he's such a loser proberly for serial stupud their were only two.

Not that the main character is a wimp and he is. But rather the whole horseshit about "I did this to you" "I am sorry" "My whole world ..." and the rest of cliches for blah-blah-blah.

Ohio, this is one of the worst stories you wrote. Poor plot, nothing to build on, unexciting ... and you could have written this in half instead of doing another empty long story.

The wimpy main character ruined what should have been a good story.

He catches his wife cheating and he just stands there while the fucker gets dressed and leaves. He puts up with both cunts (Jenny and his mom). He can't let her go. Angie should run as fast and as far as she can. This guy is a fucked up mess.

I think I have read about the most wimp assed pussy guy and that nobody could be worse, I read another story, and sure enough, he gets worse. Then I read this one. If anybody comes up with one worse than this, then that means there is not a man left in the world. Shit. Have any of you guys ever even met a man. Or is all you know wimp ass pieces of pathetic shit?

I just loved it.

I really enjoyed this story, but it needs a proper ending.

I thought I was reading a Matt Moureau story for a minute.

I gave it 5* because its very well written and i just love ohios writing...but...the guy left the bedroom walking? Wtf? And.. After her cheating ass found out the man she "fell in love with" and destroyed her marriage over was a worthless scumbag and then she came crawling back and he foynd out he still wanted her? Wtf? Well...dudes got issues for sure, but it ended well and thats why i gave it 5* but it was painful trip getting there. The guy shouldve been walking out with at least a severe limo, and her cheating ass shouldve been following him dragging her clothes while trying to get dressed and being pushed out the door. Js

I'm sure you deliberately try invent the most deplorable, depressing, annoying and pathetic specimen of a protagonist that everyone wants to fucking punch in the face before the end of the first page.

Stop making your lead characters so pathetic, wimping, simping and so reliant on validation by pussy that they accept terrible abuse. Doing martial arts (and please, in future, read up at least on the subject instead of fucking sucking made up facts out your ass) is not an auto man-card - behaviour, evolution and action are the hallmarks to look for.

Honestly, Davis was the man relatively speaking in this series - I was hoping that the story would have died by page three and the protagonist got together with someone to end our misery from his pussy-assed ways (surprise! Took a bit longer but it played out exactly like that). Fuck the protagonist. Davis for president. Let the main character suffer under a woman who had no compunction in playing him for her friend, then fucking him up, reinforcing his need to crawl to her for her immoral and abusive behaviour, emotionally and mentally abuse him some more, then live on gravy street by making him worship her. Fucked up and pathetic. Barfed a bit in my mouth, reading shit like that.

Story not real but?

Most stories she is seduced but she keeps going out with the guy so innocently?!

Who can be that stupid!

If you go out with someone else besides husband regularly something wrong

I agree with the ones where she is looking for something different or more exciting BUT I wouldn't forgive and forget either burn the bitch

I have known couples who celebrate 75 years of marriage without cheating

They Work hard at their marriage

3 stars too much crying by him

It was a nightmare story alright. That Jenny really did a number on that guy. Poor guy was pretty fucked up, almost psychotic. With that shrine to Jenny that he kept was chilling. Unfortunately it happens alot, and with the courts and legal system firmly on the ladies side, it has made this a common occurrence. Frightening for allot of people out there and not much is changing.

I really like ur style of writing as it tends to show everything in the story,especially emotions, in an almost-graphic way that I could feel it myself.(you know there’s a BIG “but”coming, right?!). But what I noticed in ur stories is that the main character is such a pathetic, wimpy guy that allows others to step on him all the time, even his own mother, and it irritates the hell outta me. Other than that, everything else seem good enough. Keep it up !

WHY DID HE STAY THERE?

Holy guacamole Batman! Talk about masochism.

1) Jenny had been going out with Alec the asshole for lunches and later was fucking him for months. Yet she had no clue he was on coke?? How clueless was the woman?!!

2) How was the asswipe allowed to fade from the story without getting seriously fucked up?!! He just goes on to his next victim without paying for fucking up what seemed to be a perfectly good marriage. Not acceptable ( although it's just a story, retribution should have figured! ) Still, 5*s.

Why Didn't this Guy Kick her to the Curb ? He Becomes a Black Belt In Karate .. And Mister Dumbass who Messed with a married Lady is still walking around ? I Know 3 Black Belts and 2 compete in competition .. No One Messes with their Ladies ..

-1 star for not divorcing the cheating whore - they are still married, given the divorce wont be initiated til months after the end of her affair it can have no bearing in an at fault divorce

-1 star for taking up with another lying whore

3 stars

How do you manage to make your protagonist so pathetic and hated within 2 pages of the story?

Martial artist, fucks bears in the arse and has a three mile long cock of steel, and even with hyper sexualization and being an epic teenager try hard, you still fuck it up.

Another writer gone the cum sucking route, straight from Chad's BBC. Sigh.

Are these the only 2 women in Dayton? Get off your ass and look for someone new you poor, pitiful chump.

Why would Angie want to get involved with an insecure arsehole like him?

Divorce Jenny, propose to Angie, invite Jenny to wedding and leave Angie at the alter to teach them both. Go back and kick the snot out of mr actor.

He was an idiot but it ended well.

Another 5/5 for a good story

Great story. Read easy.

5-star effort.

Hooked

How the heck does he let Alex walk away smirking, him being a Caucasian Bruce Lee and all? At least he would have had an outlet for all that lent up rage against Jenny. Best keep a close eye on Angie now.

Well I can tell you he is not as pretty as he used to be and is definitely not acting anymore.

After I found out that he had hit Jenny I knew I had to teach him a real lesson. Also I wanted to wipe the smirk off his face.

I caught him one day when he was high on coke and worked him over real bad. His nose was squashed against his face and could not be reset. His cheeks could not be repaired either. His legs never functioned properly again nor did his genitals or his penis.

He reported it to the Police and told them I had done it.

Davis was my alibi for the night and told the cops that I had been with him all night drinking beer and generally feeling sorry for myself (this was before my talk with Angie). Boy I owe that guy big time.

Anyway after Alec was released from hospital he was attacked again and this time the damage was more extreme. He eventually left town after his third attack and no-one has heard from him since.

No way can "call me Alec" be left out of the story! He needed major retribution for his significant contribution to the development of the plot.

And what about Mom? Her "help" needed to be acknowledged! 5*s.

@lujon2019, as always your comment gets - 1 star.

The way some of these folks get so worked up at a FICTIONAL story leaves me wondering how they deal with

day - to - day life! Thank you Ohio for another very good tale. The rest of you need to get a life.

But, I'm offering it up anyway. You should have had Angie answer that call and say, "Hello? Oh, hi mom. Listen, he can't talk now—he'll have to call you back." Saves some time convincing Mom that the queen is dead, long live the queen.

I've read a few comments and some I agree with. 1. Are there no other single women in this town? 2. What kind of mother does he have that supports an entitled princess of a wife? 3. Why does he do nothing about the sleazy actor? However, unlike many others I get Angies dilemma but she came through in the end and I think he will be happy now. Lastly what happened to the Princess? Her downfall would have completed the story. Still a 4 star story.

...of comments about how wimpy and stupid he was, they were all true. But as a person who has been a transient my entire life (military bratt, 30 yrs AD military) I totally understand the MC. He was raised in the same community and with an overbearing mother that shaped his entire outlook, maybe no fatherly influence at all. He followed all the rules, did all the right things, married the right girl but was totally unprepared for when "bad things happen to good people". He never saw it coming because of his confirmation bias. Everything she did wrong he twisted into an excuse to fit his lifes narrative. He bascally had a mental break down after her betrayal. Does it make him any less of a wim? No, but it does explain his behavior imo. When you grow up like leave it to Beaver you are woefully unprepared for lifes curveballs. I grew up in the instability of military culture, it prepares you for a lot a change. People who spend entire lives in one place, are often caught off guard when thier lives go off the rails by either their own decisions, or the decisions of others. But really this is just an adult fairytale cast in modern times. None of these people are real and none of these events happened. Plus although it is a staple here in LW, very few paramours ever get punished in real life. It was a good read if not frustrating, but isn't that what a good story does, takes you somewhere else for a time and gets you all caught up with characters? Good job Ohio, hope you start posting again soon.

Good story! There is one point where Jenny says something like "I made a mistake" and I'm wondering "Because you thought you were trading up, but didn't, or because you betrayed your vows?" I rather wish he'd asked her that. However, I thought it was a terrific story.

And it’s just as good!

just took a glance at the first page.....nearly puked....jumped to pg 5 to tell u dat u r a fucking perverted wimp.....plz stop writing.... don't waste our time writing about ur wimpiness....u fuckin wimp

I wanted a bit more questions from him to her about why she's sorry? I wanted her to answer why she came crawling back after 7months!.

In all honesty it was over when he 'surprised' her that day in the bed, bare in mind she was in control of her decision and feelings then. I would of bought the day up with this;

1 you acted like I was friend of the family and you hid your body from me

2 you called him baby, darling and had his interests above my own

3 you 'fell' in love with him and been having an affair for the last 3+months

4 you told me your leaving me to be with him because your 'soulmates'

5 you didn't really give a shit about my feelings whilst showering, cleaning the bedroom and then finally talking to me about moving on

6 you made it clear you were leaving me, you moved out and never looked back

So in the end right there and the next 7months afterwards was him coming to terms of his life without jenny and maybe only needed a few important answers and then the rest was history.

Sad story where in the end he came out better than in reality and I'm glad for him.

great story but would of lied a different ending to their first meeting, as explained up top

Nick is a perpetual emotion victim and his relationship with Angie will be a disaster in the end also... he can't tell or relay to anyone how to treat him... he let's them treat him like they want and eventually they begin to totally disrespect him and walk all over, even destroy him, emotionally... he needs serious counseling and to grow a backbone if he is ever to succeed in the relationship department... otherwise, he needs to just stick to friendships.