by Hestomi
hate to be negative but this was pretty dumb. First, how'd she get his number to call? Did I miss something? second, the whole morning before they went jogging scene was sooo unbelievable that it wasn't fun to even try and suspend disbelief.
sorry to be so negative but plot, even if just meant to be a wham-bam-thank-ya-maam type story, and chars. need more development.
But definitely could have been better. It brought back some memories of two affairs I had with my professors. One was barely 30 and lasted about two months but the other was in his 50's and really knew how to make love to a woman. His wife had died of cancer and he was desperate for affection. I ended up sleeping with him for about five years. Maybe twice a month. He even invited me to go on a few trips with him. He I was, an 18 year old girl touring the world with a man of 54. But God could that man eat pussy!!