All Comments on 'My Sergeant'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Hmmm military

I've never cared much for the military angle but your story may just change my mind!

SEVERUSMAXSEVERUSMAXalmost 18 years ago
This one definitely got me hard.

Very hot and intense. The danger. The forbidden nature of it. The wild, shower sex. The passionate crush by the female soldier for her Sergeant. Fraternization was never quite this hot. The only flaw was that the Sergeant didn't wash his cock between fucking her ass and returning to her pussy. That kind of thing can lead to infection. Just a thought for realism's sake.

In general, however, this is well-worthy of an AH Review, and will be mentioned.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Whoa girl

Damn! made me wish I could be in the army!!!

wildwildbestwildwildbestalmost 18 years ago
Dammmnnnn

I only rated it a 100 because 10000 wasn't available...seriously, just for my own selfish reasons, you have to turn this into a longer story...please, please, please, with sugar on top! That totally, completely, seriously phucking rocked! I'm not worthy...I'm not worthy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
lovely story

My Sergeant is a lovely albeit too short love story, well conceived and well-written.

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