All Comments on 'My Sister, And Her Friends Ch. 02'

Hope he grows some balls and starts taking control. This wimpy bullshit pisses me off. He needs to tell his sister who he is gonna fuck, not let her decide if he can even fuck.

cant wait for the next part. be good to see Vanessa's mom get involved

your fine story is unfolding as it should. looking forward to more episodes! thank you

Patience. Teenage boys do not go from shy wallflower to macho man overnight. It takes time. I think the author is doing a great job. Looking forward to the next chapter.

H cup boobs huh?

Great concept, great execution, can't wait for next chapter. I am ready to stroke my cock at work.

Get an editor so they will catch stuff like Mrs and no period or i or fell for feel, which a spell check will miss but Words grammar checker will find.

And yes H cup. Measure above boobs, Measure boobs. H cup is 7" difference. I looked that up. There are all kinds of charts etc on human sizes, weights, ages, etc. Too many authors don't use them meaning a 5'10" girl does NOT weight 110 pounds with double D's.

I enjoyed this even more than the first chapter!

I found this story from your second chapter posting and went back to read the first before I read #2. Excellent. Then I was so glad #2 was already posted so I could read it and now I can't wait for #3. I love stories where the characters have to work for it; and where they struggle against what they know is "right" and the conflict between right and their feelings. To have her friends in on a part of it, and now a friend's mother...well the world is opening wide for our young shy boy, who is losing his reticence quickly. Thank you for a very nice story. I'm still catching my breath.

I found myself not wanting the story to end.... please don't leave us hang'in...

She's 5'3 with size H cup breast. Ummm ewww lols I keep picturing a fat ass bitch. She tells him they can't fuck & he can't eat her pussy so after the bow job I would've left. Because she just playing games & the sister dictating who he can fuck but won't fuck him herself. She's just a selfish bitch that's playing games just like her fat ass friend.

Even better than the first chapter! Very quickly Becoming one of my favorite series here. I hope the next installment is ready soon.

I appreciate all of the comments, thank you. Many of you seem to be enjoying this and that feels great. Sorry for the typos, there aren't too many, I hope. I'll keep an eye on them. I get very excited when the creative juices start flowing and miss things sometimes. Also having trouble with my tenses, but I'm trying.

Next chapter won't be for a few days, then Literotica's approval process after that. Yes, David's a bit of a wimp. He was raised by a bitchy mom and no dad. But his balls are somewhere, I think he might find them pretty soon! Vanessa has no complaints about him...

If you have and suggestions or private comments, send to the same name at gmail dot com.

Great read so far mojavejoe420! Please keep them coming!

I enjoyed reading this. At first I was afraid this was going to be a "bitchy sister dominates" type story but now i think you got something else planned here. I look forward to your next installment,

i hope this is going to become a long series. more content soon, i hope.

An interesting story, very hot. Makes me wish I'd had friends like that!

so how'd she do 112 guys? i know this was a different time but still