All Comments on 'My Sister, My Lover'

....... the story was certainly "WELL DONE" and very believable, Thanks

great except for the fact that its NOT INCEST

Very well done--almost like a confession.

Perhaps it could have been better, and the ending could have been a little more complete; but I still like it.

Good job

nice, believable, and heartwarming

ok though i didn't read all of your story i did find that you used 2 different tenses past and present that wouldn't have been bad if you were going from recalling a memory to explaining a situation and honestly when you used the present tense it read like cyber sex so as a constructive tip next time put it all in past tensebecause it would have held me longer if you would have

Once again -- Love wins out.

Although I haven't a sister, I have often wished for one to love. This could have been my story. I really liked it. Thanks to Author

How can it be incest between two adopted people?

And please make up your mind - which tense are you writing in?

Really well written and very sexy. Felt like I was right there!

Thank You

It does not have to be incest to be in Incest/Taboo category. Some would consider sex between adoptive siblings (as they thought themselves to be, initially) to be TABOO.

Paul in Oklahoma