All Comments on 'My Sister Saved My Life'

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
interesting story line

A little on the sci-fi side and a great fantasy. Well done!

Thanks for the good read.

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 14 years ago
Very stimulating story,

with a brilliant plot. (But really all I'm asking for is just a tiny, tiny dab of 713 for the men in my life...please.) Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Dreams

Ahhhh, the adolescent dreams of a 12 year old. Silly at best.

SPEN STERLINGSPEN STERLINGover 14 years ago
awesome

I thought this was hilarious. Great idea, plus a great fantasy!

AzPilotAzPilotover 14 years ago
I agree- a good idea, well written

A funny story, with a twist, well done. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great idea.

Loved the concept, great idea. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Weapon?

In the wrong hands this could be used as a powerful weapon

sexmatesexmateover 14 years ago
EXCELLENT STORY LINE

Now this is a concept that I haven't read till now!

Excellent story line and very imaginative!

Thanks for writing!

sexmate

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Fun read

Very imaginative. Fun to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
so-so

just so-so it could have been so much better if it had more brother sister sex she was barely there at all wasn't worth being in the incest area she should have been the only one to help him not some bunch of strangers it defeats the incest title

VictorDoUrdenVictorDoUrdenalmost 14 years ago
Kinda...

It a bit corny here and there, overall its amusing and the ending makes me wonder where is the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
More sister needed!!

The sister saving part was good but More sister brother action would have been appreciated

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
TITLE HAS LITTLE TO DO WITH STORY

for the title to work with this story the SISTER should be the only one to help him not a bunch of nameless sluts. THIS IS SUPOSED TO BE THE INCEST AREA not a little incest then the sluts take over area. do a total rewrite and leave the extra sluts out and keep the sex to just the brother and sister.

jane marwoodjane marwoodabout 11 years ago
5*****

Loved it. Would have liked it to be longer.

WmsraubWmsraubabout 10 years ago
i want some

please where can I get some 713

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
to good

to good to be real but if it s real give me the address,PLEASE,PLEASE.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Story is awesome make a part 2 Sis could help with recovery

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 8 years ago
A good sister, indeed

When a guy's life hangs by a thread and the only thing that will save him is a good fucking by his sister, I say, "Way to go, sis!"

Not many guys can say they have a sister who cares as much. A well-told story which shows how much sibling love can save lives.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Please continue this story? I really like it.

bradd50bradd50almost 7 years ago
More Please

Give us more!!!!!..Lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
LOL!

incest Si Fy. Sorry Bro we had to whack your Pe Pe off so it wouldn't infect the rest of the world. Not to worry we plan to do research to grow another Pe Pe in 15 or 20 years.

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