All Comments on 'My Sister Sharon'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
great

The best I have seen in awhile. Quite original in its telling. looking forward to a continuation.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
More Please!!

This is another one of those stories where it needs to be continued But, you never hear from the author again.

It's like they broke their pen and quit.

Fire up the keyboard and lets see some more!! 2-3 years it way to long a wait.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
GREAT!!!!

Why didn't you continue it was so good;Please Continue

oldwayneoldwayneabout 16 years ago
Will It Ever Be Continued?

It was a hot tale......so far.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
he's a bit stupid

if he has any brains he would have dumped the bitch girlfriend on the spot and why would he even think of going back to his room he should have gone for the walk like he said and stayed out til morning

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Hot and seductive narration

Story is fantastic and hot,

please write part 2 also as story is sexy

LegallySaneLegallySanealmost 4 years ago
Too Bad....

All unfinished stories should be banned. Give them a month and if it's not finished, take the story down and ban the author.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Wonder why the author ended with "things have a way of resurfacing..." if we were never going to get a sequel? Also kinda sucks she mentioned being on the pill, impregnation would be the best possible outcome

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