by alexengland
I suppose the gay (Dan, Lou) angle added to the tale but it does nothing for me. With sisters like these, I envision a few more parts to the story, with the siblings becoming even closer,Dan "straightening"up--perhaps moving in with Jill thus shutting up the parents about her getting married and maybe sending them over the edge at the same time. Just a thought. It's your story and I did enjoy it. It just begs for more IMHO.