All Comments on 'My Son'

Soooo naughty and nasty! An extremely well written story!

You keep switching between first and third person, from "me and my son fuck" to "Karen and Neal fuck"!

It spoils the mood, for me.

"Play with them and suck them," I instructed me son.

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Neal dropped to his knees between his mother's legs, his eyes wide ......

Need I say more?

It seems I'm not the only person losing contact with the story by your changing point of view.

It really does bugger it up. The flow has gone.

yeah,yeah,yeah, 10 inch cock ,mother wants it, and so they fucked, boriiiiiiiing,,,,,,

with all that fucking and sucking there had to be sore pussies and raw cock heads. They had to be skin and bones. be a little Realistic.

AGAIN YOU INSERTED A BLACK MAN INTO THE PICTURE AND RUINED THE STORY.

If you would label your shit correctly, we wouldn't have to waste time reading it.

If you would label your shit correctly, we wouldn't have to waste time reading it.

Don't worry about the interracial thing. Not everyone is a racist. Very sexy story.

TRYANYTHING YOU TRIED IN .YOU STARTED OUT HOT THEN YOU BLEW IT. I WANTED TO READ AN INCEST STORY. NOT A MIXED GANG BANG, EVEN IF MOTHER LOVED IT. LABEL YOUR STORIES AS SUCH CRAP......... A WASTE OF MY TIME.............LAROC OF AGES.

of a story until you brought a 'black' and a gang bang into it then you RUINED a nice little incest story between a mother and son, stupid...

I loved how mom served and pleased her son and over time became more and more submissive and served all cummers that her son brought home to use her. Moms should always please their sons. I hope this story does not end here....so many possibilities. Thank you for making me so very wet!!!

Loved the mom and son incest angle; not so much the gangbang with his friends. Still good storytelling though, thanks.

who talks this way??

What is the obsession with mothers with large greats?

Why do we need to know her cup size? So many stories have this detail. Not every mother is so well endowed.

Also, please pay attention to ages. You stRt the story with the mom a certain age? Keep it that way through the story.

Their names weren't Neal and Karen, they were Wally and June Cleaver. It happened on the night dad sent Wally up to get the Beaver.....sorry, just couldn't help myself

Good except switching between 1st and 3rd person.

I suggest you change the boy's age so that he is actually legal

Not a bad story. I was expecting a mother and son love story and would have been very happy with one. Having the gang bang in this messed up the flow. I understand you wanted to up the action, but a loving mother and son story would have been great. Thanks for your time and imagination.

I read this ages ago. I remember being annoyed then about the point of view continuously shifting from first person to third person and back again. Like other commenters, I also didn't care for the interracial gang bang. If you're going to repost your old stories, at the very least start with an author's note stating as such. You should have probably addressed the POV issues before reposting as well.

stopped reading at 10”

As soon as a story gets to ‘ It had to be at least 10" long ‘ I stop reading. They become unrealistic and kill the mood I’m searching for.

This starts in 1st person, then 3rd, then 1st, then 3rd...

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PICK ONE!

IK YOU SAY TO 'TRYANYTHING' BUT TRY MAYBE NOT TO HAVE COONS IN THIS STORYS???!!! A1SO WHO TALKS LIKE THAT!! WHEN WILL A BOY EVER SAY 'GOSH MOM?' no hE WILL SAY WHAT THE FLIP LIKE MY TITLE OF COMMENT! also ganging ruined the flow especially with black man >:(((((( I DONT WANT TO HEAR ABOUT BIGGEST BLACKEST MAN AGAIN. also how will 5'6 be dick level with 6'4 man? SHE WILL BE LIKE KNEE HEIGHT TO HIM MAKE HER TALLER!!

cum cocktail was a nice touch tho 0 porn clips outta 10

A beautiful piece of incest. Such a naughty and nasty story! Don't listen to these horrible racists. I personally loved the part with nate and tammy. Your attention to detail on the mother was thoroughly enjoyable. The tenses could have been slightly better written, but overall a lovely piece!.

unrealistic and very poorly written

Was this an update?

Do the words Herpes or Syphilis mean anything to you? Totally unbelievable story fit only for wanking to.

This story isn’t new. I read this before several months ago.

sometimes just a quick well written piece of total sex is just want you need! great story.

The changing POV automatically eliminates the concept of well written.

She would look hilarious with a figure 40-24-34 .

Sometimes a good fast wank is exactly what I'm looking for and this is perfect for that.

The only thing I didn't like was the flipping from first to third person. Keep writing.

XYZ

Changing from first to third person was aggravating, and then it got ridiculous when she fucked everything that came in the door.

Nice story the part where she is fucking anybody is a little much though!

After my father's funeral I ended up back at my parents house with mum and my friend Neil,I thought we were all going to go to bed and I eventually fell asleep on the sofa,I thought I was dreaming when I opened my eyes to see Neil my friend fucking my mother over the chair! Don't be so loud I heard mum saying! I continued to watch with one eye, mum looked like a professional sucking his cock and noticed that I was awake! I think I've had to much to drink trying to hide the fact that she was sucking my friends cock! Neil soon realised that I was awake! Alright mate he said to me? I'm fine pal! Mum grabbed her things and went upstairs pretty quickly,sorry mate Neil said to me! No worries mate I replied,it just happened he said,go upstairs to her I said, my god you're OK with this pal? She needs a bit of fun I said, Neil went upstairs partially clothed and I heard my mother telling him no,he worked his magic on her and suddenly they were dancing slowly,her head rolled back then I could see Neil rubbing her pussy, knowing that I was there Neil forced her on the bed and fucked her,looking back to the doorway and smiling!he was talking dirty to her asking if she liked his cock in her pussy! You pervert she said to Neil don't tell Richard will you laughing between themselves,tell him yourself Diane! Mum was mortified when she saw me in the doorway! Trying to find the right words to say to me she tried covering her tits! It's not what it looks Richard! Really mum I said! Neil poked his cock against her thighs calling her a tart! Her eyes closed and her mouth opened as Neil pushed his cock in her pussy! As she opened her eyes I was stood right infront of her! Don't stop she told Neil! Come here Diane! My mother sat on his cock facing the door,she give me this really naughty look, I was like a rabbit in the headlights! Fucking hell mum I said unzipping myself! She was out of breath and got off Neil's cock,she just walked past me into the bathroom and had some water,still talking to me are you mate Neil asked me? Why not I said, he joined mum in the bathroom and walked her back into her bedroom, look at that he whispered to me pointing at my mother's ass, your dad must have loved fucking her mate! Yeah I bet I answered, suck my cock infront of Richard Diane! Like a total slut my mother kneeled down and gave Neil a blowjob, that's your mother he said to me! Mum giggled feeling his balls! Neil pulled her stocking straps forcing her bum into the air,he knew I was looking at her cunt and told my mother! Watch me fuck her Neil said, dirty old bitch Diane! Fuck she's wet mate he said,yeah Neil said! I hadn't realised that I'd gotten closer and had a clear view of my mother's holes just as my friend put his cock in her,

Liked the story and the part where they were having threesomes with his girlfriends but you ruined it with the other guys having sex with mom still gave it a 4 !!!!!!!!!!