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Click here"Mmmm. That was incredible," she whispers, her lips brushing against my ear.
I can't help but laugh, feeling so good, so happy. She pushes herself up to be sitting up straight in front of me, looking down at me. I look up at her, her firm, young body perched on top of me, my cock dwindling inside of her. I groan and stretch, liking the way my body feels as my muscles flex.
"Happy?" she says, a smirk breaking across her lips.
"Yup," I say and sigh.
"I can tell by that shit-eating grin on your face," she says, light and joking, and slides a finger across my lips.
"I can't help it. You just look so good sitting like that," I say and grab her hips.
"Really?" she asks and moves her hips slightly. "I'm glad you approve."
"Definitely," I say and push back up again, not wanting my cock to fall out of her, wanting to stay inside of her.
She turns her head as we both hear a creaking like someone is coming down the stairs. She looks back at me and smiles with that big, impish grin, eager to see what I'll do, what will happen next. I smile back at her and shrug my shoulders, not caring what happens next, just happy to be inside of her, looking at her. Her smirk turns into a big smile and she leans forward to kiss me and I fall into that kiss, holding onto it, wanting it to last forever.
I would've liked an ending, but a story of doing ridiculously stupid things with a "bad girl" ticks the boxes. Very hot scene. 5*
...and I love it. Very good story and definitely erotic.
WOW I just read this killer story by Shoguy -college bound: summer to remember--wow the hottest on this site --than i hit on yours--real good too..check out the shoguy story..
I enjoyed your Story started kinda slow but I liked that and ended with a bang ! Really liked that... But what happened did they get caught does Wife get turned into play toy and made to workout with son as coach and son becumming Valerie's play toy? Hmmm So Many Probabilities....
Have a great day a Keep writing...
I agree with the others that reviewed before me - you should continue.
If Valerie gets pregnant, he'll get the child he wants. Of course he won't marry Valerie cause Valerie doesn't want to get married plus they both know it's fun fucking around while she's still with hia son and he's still married.
LOVED IT... brilliantly done.. not every ones cup of tea, but the seduction was erotic as hell.. every time i read the story during last 4 years or so, i have been left wondering who came down da stairs..
The only thing missing in this story is that she got knocked up by her future father-in-law in this instance of instant hot liquid sex of catching your sperm in her heated and ovulating desires to have a baby with the same blood as you and your son. Now maybe you can raise a child that will grow into someone with an idea of responsibility.
You need to continue this story with the son's girlfriend and you developing a lust relationship with the son continuing to date this girl. As she gets pregged by you, perhaps some kind of continuance could develop where she moves in with you and your son and wife and you keep fucking her on the side and breeding her.
Excellent story! Very, very hot sex. I loved the way the father went from baffled to in control. The idea that they kept going despite someone coming downstairs is interesting. I'd like to see you follow this with a few more chapters. Again, excellent writing.
The best stories pull you in and make you feel every thrust. You did just that .Great Job!
Nice development of the male character, his dilemma, resistance and finally giving in. The sex scene is wonderfully written, I could almost feel his release! I like that you leave the reader in slight suspense at the end, too.
if i had a daughter in law, or a prospective one, she is just the type i would really want, a good looking, cock sucking, great fucking slut. very desirable.