All Comments on 'My Story'

by Amateuririshbhoy

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

This could be a really good story but I had to quit reading it midway through. You need to pass this through an editor to help you with sentence structure and punctuation.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
cheasy,

It would not have gained entry to my mouth. If they cannot keep clean they can go elsewhere.

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