by DrTool
Well written and a tender beautiful story brought a tear to my eye
It was a nice short story and could possibly be turnes into a novel since you write so well. You'd just have to develop your ideas more. However, with that being said, what I just read wasn't erotica.
Funny how some commenters say it's a good story but gloss over the rape vibe / underage molestation vibe it gives off, after all, a teacher and a student is what ends up with the teacher in jail.