All Comments on 'My Subway Angel'

This is a wonderful story. Im a true romantic at heart and was just captivated by the story. You could almost feel the love they seem to share. My only sorrow is I wish you had ended it later...I would have loved to see how they were days, weeks, months later. Do they stay as one? Thanks so much for writing such a wonderful piece.

Hot and romantic all rolled into one. The feelings you describe at the beginning, not knowing if you'll ever see the person again, coulda-woulda-shoulda.. all feelings i'm sure everyone's felt from time to time. Awesome read!

We should all have such encounters in the New York subway. I know exactly what you mean--sometimes you see a total stranger who just takes your breath away with his/her beauty, and the happiness at being privileged to witness such a sight is mixed with despair, because you know you'll never see them again. I've never had a sequel to such a glimpse that remotely resembles what you describe, worse luck :-). Best, Ken

That was a great story, really enjoyed it. I'm going to check out your other listings now.

Darling, I don't think you need an editor at all. Litty are just a bit squeamish about things, like when you're vague about age or there's an issue with violence. I've banged my head on their Ed. team plenty of times and it's frustrating but it certainly doesn't mean you can't write. This story is well laid out, with a good plot structure, excellent, believably fanciable characters and red hot sex. What more could anyone want?

Keep on keepin' on!

xx.Sadie

I absolutely loved this story!!

Keep up the great writing!!!

i love this! your story and disclaimer are so both so poignantly sweet. i hope you will one day find that special someone.

A really beautiful story.

And sexy as hell.

After readig this exceptional story, all I can really say is WOW!! There are no words that can fully explain my feelings as I was reading this story. Bravo!!! Well done!!!

I loved this story. Reminded me of a guy I saw once. He was beautiful and i was lucky enough to get the chance to speak to him but i never saw him again after that. This story is lovely, the detail is amazing and the story just draws you in. Thanks for sharing, it was beautiful.

Love not in simple. But love like flying into the sky to touch the stars or diving deep into the very depths of the sea.

***Hold your breath and hope***

This is one of my absolute all-time favorites. I read it over and over and over again!!!!

I find it really touching when "love at first sight" hits you so clearly.

~mozzarella

i never have read your stuff oooooo myyyyyyy hot. keep goimng

it is amazing what happens when we come across a beautiful soul like that. it stops time for us and steals our breath. there's nothing like it in the world. i saw mine in a coffee shop and couldn't find it in me to brave the rejection. he was the most beautiful thing I'd ever seen. I've seen other beautiful people before and since, but something about him was different. i am sad that you never saw your angel again, but be glad you saw him. some live their whole lives not knowing that perfect moment out of time. thank you for this story. it brought back memories.