All Comments on 'My Sweet Prisoner'

This was an amazing story. Very much so. So full and consistent. Thanks for sharing it. (A tiny but: Personally, I hated the cartoon sounds. Let's not dwell too much on that, though.) The story was brilliant, presentation and flow was good and fascinating, and I am appaled. Yes! Appaled! That as yet, nobody else has bothered to stop and give you a comment on this fine piece of work. Keep writing.

One of the best stories I have read yet on Literotica. This could potentially go under the Romance heading as well as the non-consent heading. It was just Brilliant. I hope to perhaps see a conclusion to this piece, but if not, oh well.

If I don't give this a 5 it's because an essential part of the story didn't ring true to me. The character Ashley seemed entirely too accepting of the situation into which she had been placed. Perhaps this can be explained by the extent of the control being exerted upon her, but I would have expected more "none-consent" from her. Perhaps the story could have offered reasons why she might have so readily taken to this forced escape from reality.

I have been on Literotica for many years and this is clearly one of the top five stories I have read. I sincerely hope that you get as much pleasure from the writing as you have given your readers. Your story line was particularly unique and well thought out. Looking forward to reading much more from you. Thanks!

this is one of the very best stories i've read here on lit. it had all the elements of a love story with a slight twist, but i truly feel that we need to read the conclusion too..

please don't make us wait for very long, and thank you for a wonderful love story !!

Again this was the best story that I have read on Lit. I love how the whole went and the end, when you discover that he is write this as a letter to her. It didn't have a happy ending, which kinda made it realistic. I love it.

the story was completely amazing. i hope that another chapter is added that tells what happens next, what she decides to do.

Can't there be a second part? Maybe she can punish him somehow but kinda end up with him as his wife or something. Please???

Wow... I thought this was going to be like all of the other countless stories. Where all it is, is constant intercourse with the usage of slang words and horrible grammar and spelling. Yet, it was different. This was an actual story full of emotions and characters that could possible be real, in some form or fashion. I was so pleased when your character "John" realized he was in love with her. That was beautiful. Please keep writing. There are few people out there with talent like yours. So please, don't let it go to waste, and do not limit yourself to the bare minimum. With great sincerity, S.R.

Sexy, yes. Love? Nope. He lost that privilege when he confessed, destroying her ideas about him and their time together. He could have set it up so that they could have a future together if he wanted, but lover boy here had to fuck it up by coming clean. Stupid! Stupid! Stupid!

i wanted to be Ashley, sooooooooo much!x

not sure what else to say. think i saw MAYBE one typo, otherwise everything was perfect- characters, story, (sex). stories of this caliber are rare.

Sad ending to a great story. I wasn't sure what to expect when i started reading it and then I became totally immersed in the story. It was so different from the other stories here that I have read. I really loved it.

ITS FUNNY HOW THINGS WORK IN ARE MIND. IT WAS A DIFFERENT KIND OF STORY ONE THAT COULD OF HAPPEN. THERE WAS COM PASSION THERE, IT BROUGHT A TEAR TO MY EY E. THANKS PKG

Go forth and write for the general public, you have a gift, share it and be rewarded

That was amazing, you are a brilliant author. I hope one day you publish a book!! Amazing story. Please write another. x

This is by far the BEST story on this site. The way in which the plot was done was absolutly fantastic. You do have a rare talent, continue honing this skill.

i love your writing. This scene in "My Sweet Prisoner" is such that i wish i were taken like that for a couple of weeks. A great vacation that would be. ;D

Your story is such that i only dream about writing. It is wonderful. Truly amazing.

i hope you keep up the good work in your writings. Enjoy. A second part would be fascinating, i'm sure. Even so, you have given me ideas of a lot of different ways this story could continue.

Thank you, Jumpinjetta

First of all oh my god this story was SEXY, ROMANTIC AND DARK all at the same time and I can pretty much say I loved reading it, The only thing it lacked was better sex scenes but overall it was very good.

I have been regularly reading entries know this site for months and this is my first comment.... truly exceptional writing - and would make a great movie!!! :)

Wow, well written. First time commenting on literotica after hundreds of reads. Yours made me want to register just to leave praise

One of the best stories I have ever read!!

P.S. Are you going to write a sequel?

What a well written story. I was completely absorbed and felt so sad when it ended. Thank you so much for sharing that with us. It was really wonderful.

I have never been so enthralled in a piece of literature. You're a wonderful story teller and it's been a privilege to read your work. I really hope you are considering writing a sequel and I can't wait to read more of your material. Thank you.

what happens next?????

Please write more!!! The best story I've read!!

Finish it now, right the fuck now!!!!!!!!!!!!

I don't know if you planned on writing more from this point, after chapter 5, but I'd really love if you did. This story is amazing. It had it's points when it was purely sexy, and some points that were intimate, and some that were really sad. You actually managed to change my opinion of John, which doesn't happen often when i read stories. I normally have a set idea of how I'm gonna like a character from the beginning, and in the first couple chapters, i thought John was just some creepy asshole. But i started to like his character more and more as the story went on, to the point that i actually thought he should get to stay with Ashley and hoping that she would forgive him. So pleaseeee, i beg of you to make a follow up to this story about her forgiving him and them ending up together. It doesn't even have to be sexually themed, i just want a happy ending! Please! :(

Just want to thank anybody who's left a comment, and even though I haven't submitted for a long time, I still check and read these comments!

JJ

I felt as if I was there, this story is the epitome of all my fantasies wrapped into one. Truly amazing.

I felt naughty, dirty, aroused and so sad reading this story. Please write more. If not to continue this, then another story with your kind of "slant". ;)

This is a wonderful story! The intro before anything sexy happens is quite long, so I have to admit to skimming it to get to the captivity part. The description of the scenes where the captive and captor help each other out with the written requirements is deliciously HOT!!! I disagree that the story calls for any more of an ending. It is perfect, and I hope you will pleasure us with more stories.

This story was every bit as arousing as it was disturbing.

I'm a little concerned that the idea in the story actually had some twisted appeal to me. Not enough to delude myself into seriously considering it, but it's still there.

It was truly an amazing story. There were unexpected twists but i loved it. And very arousing!

nearly perfect setup for a movie.

check yourself if you would like to make a screenplay out of it.

or allow someone else to do it.

This was a great story. I think you should extend it or write a sequel, something to the effect that she loved him too much to let him go and decided to look for him.

I love the way we get to learn about Ashley as she navigates the changing circumstances of her captivity. I also like how she tried to dominate John. That was my favorite part.

I really love your stories, especially this one. Will you write more? Please? It's hard to find stories that 'work for me'. I'd have to write my own, but that's not nearly as exciting as reading someone else's. :P

Honestly, one of the best stories I've ever read here. Not just sexy but well written. The story engaged me as much as the sex. Well done... Gripping stuff!

Great read but what did she do? So many questions unanswered....

It looks like you dont come to the site anymore but if by chance you do you have sooo many ppl that would love to see this story finished its making me crazy not knowing how she reacts i want them together with a happy ending but i want a ending more then anything this was a great story just a little upset with the no end well no more to it cause you could consider that a end but i think it would please alot of ppl to get some more of this story

Please finish the story, it was one of the best stories I've ever read but it needs an ending, it doesn't matter what the ending is just finish it lol

I love this story so much! I need to know what happens when she wakes up!

Originally clicked this story for arousal, ended up almost tearing up lol... amazing work my friend keep it up and would love to hear part 2 of john and ashley's story

That was one of the sickest, most perverse, yet strangely romantic stories I've ever read. I know this story is 10 years old now, but I hope there's a possibility of a second story/epilogue. I look forward to reading your other stories.

Like everyone else here, I too would love a bit more of a follow up.. maybe he gets her again? Or she emails him? All that unprotected sex... maybe she’s pregnant? Either way, I loved that it wasn’t filled with crude slang or storyline’s. it was very well written! I enjoyed it very much :)

Wow! What a beautiful story. Well written. I was hanging on to every page. I like to think they got together and lived happily ever after. Well done!

Big turn on, couldn't get enough. I want more of this story. Figure out a way to get her back to you. And "John", it really was well written. We do love a person who can turn us on, tease us unmercifully and then bring us to a deep climax. So thank you for that insight. Give us more. It's a wild adventurous sex story with a romantic theme. Make this into a novel.

Incredibly creative, romantic, and hot. This was amazing.

Amazing effort. Felt pity for the dude. Would be cool if she is pregnant now.