All Comments on 'My Teacher, My Love Ch. 04'

by APGilmore

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
much better

it was still a little stiff, probly from the unnecessary extra words. i liked this part, it felt more relaxed and i was able to get into the story a little. the kissing scence didn't hurt xD anyways i like how this part was written compared to the parts before =)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Such a sweet story, I actually got a toothache.

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