All Comments on 'My Telija Ch. 04'

I love this story but have a hard time following the plot. I know real life intrudes and keeps you from posting more often, but I had to skim over the earlier chapters to recapture the who's who and what just happened urgency. It's a great tale so far and love the whole Jordan-Vendish dance

I love this story true and love the twists and turns I hope you are able to post again soon as I too had to go back and re read, plus of course it gets interesting and ta... dah... cliff hanger!! I hate cliff hangers lol

I was too excited to go back and reread the story, but I remembered who everyone was as soon as some of the surrounding points took hold. Keep up the excellence!! Can't wait.

I am loving this story and Jordan and Vendish are hot together. Sorry but lit isn't letting me vote on this, I will try later

This story just has everything!! such fun..such drama and excitement!! Thanks for the extended chapter! :o)

OMG! I'm loving this story, but way to leave us hanging. :D I hope to see more very, very soon. *bites nails*

Can hardly wait for the next chapter.

still can't vote. Loved the story, can't wait to see what happens next. I'll keep checking back; hope they get the voting deal fixed soon.

=P Great read, loving Jordy ;) hes pretty awesome and surprising at the same time haha Thank you and keep up the good work!!

I have read all of your stories over the last 24hrs and I think there are just sooo great!

Cant wait to read more about Dan/Rowe and Ven/Jordan.

Keep it up!

:)

I read it as soon as it was up and fell in absolute love with it. (Didn't have time to comment until now.)

I freaked out at the end and honestly can't wait until the next chapter is out...I know I'm going to end up checking your submissions just about every day to see if, by a miracle, the next chapter is up.

You need an oxygen mask to read this story and this is up there with one of the best stories I've read here yet!!!!

Okay, had to re-read to catch up, but no problem, love the story and you do supernatural SO well. The descriptions, the characters, all of it. I just want Ven and Jordan to put aside all the outside influences and decide what they want and need from each other, but I guess that's the central plot of the story and it probably won't be fixed any time soon.

This story is so good! Oh my God I love it! I hope you'll post the next chapter soon, I'm dying to know what happens next

Ven and Jordan... I love them together, I hope you dont let that Hazia guy come between them, I don't like him at all.

Great chapter. I love the amount of imagination you have stuffed into each chapter and you've created this amazing world that I feel like I can see b/c of your words. I loved this chapter most I think. The dance was really hot. I would think it would be really hot to dance with others like that and tease the shit out of each other and build up the frustration of others touching your 'mate' and the need until there would be an explosion by the time you were together again. I love the way Jordan is learning. I really dreaded reading this chapter, I have to admit, b/c it just seemed so terrible to see Jameen in the place he is. I think it is great that Jordan's mom was made fae to help save him. I have to go back and read I think b/c there is so much to remember and I can't remember details about Rain. Overall, just keep doing this as well as you have been. I would say maybe just add little reminders of who certain people are (in Rain's case) or what they can do. Does Ven have any control over the earth? I was wondering after the vines he used.

hey love the story, i cant wait to see the rest

cant wait for the rest its a amazing story and really pulls you in.

Great story and writer. My words as I read the last word was "better not be the last chapter. Damn it was. I can't wait either for the next one

Hurry hurry hurry!!

Pls I beg of you I have been waiting months for the rest of this story. Pls hurry I can wait to see the end pls pls pretty pls

i need a new ch. you are a meaner to end it like that. i feel like crying now T_T

For shiz! I really got into this story and it sucks that you just ended it. I think its wonderful and then it stopped, and you put out a short story that wasn't this. PLEASE. WRITE MORE OF THIS!! LMAO

I have totally fallen in love with this story. It is an amazing piece of storytelling. Please please add more chapters soon :)

Hey everyone,

Noticed a lot of people asking Night to continue her amazing stories.

She has continued them but not at Lit due to story thefts.

Her stories including more Dan/Rowe and Telija can be found at her blog.

http://nighttempest.blogspot.com/

There is a link on the right-hand side to go to her story list and select individual chapters etc.

hope this helps everyone.

:)

Mik

Great story that I have read 3 times but what happened to Cade and Dan and Rowe?

More that was so good I need more FYI wright more please

WRITE MORE!!!

It felt as if... as if I was actually there is the story seeing it through their eyes and hearing their thoughts.... the way you described the stuff.... I could actually see it as I was reading this... THAT is what I look for in a story... THAT is what makes a story stand out among other stories.... You know this story is good enough to publish when you finish it... You WILL finish it right?

You know I've read thousands of stories over the years since I found out you could read on the internet, and you know what? this has got to be in my to 50 favorites that

I wouldn't mind reading again and that kept me on edge!!!

So please /PLEASE/ keep up the writing!?

I'll bet my almost anything that if you published any of your work it would be a great seller, though I don't know of about those who only read hetero books but the others would definitely like this! I may not be a writer but I am a reader, and I'm giving this a ten star rating!!!

Go to the author's blog. (It can be found in her author bio). The rest of this story, and more, can be found there.

I cant wait till the next chapter lol its getting intense.

FANTASTIC! Pleeeeease don't make me wait too long!

That another fantastic story was left unfinished.

Omg! Where is the next chapter? You can't leave us hanging!!! Omg! Are you working on the next chapter. I'm completely and hopelessly hooked. I need to know what happens!!! Please!!!???!!!

I went through and read all the old comments and it seems the author was having problems with story theft on this site, I have found the rest of this story on their blog site! Looks like chapter 5,6,7 & finale are there

http://nighttempest.blogspot.com/

Where’s the rest of this story? Are you leaving it like this? Disappointed!

Well shit! You really left this story hanging here. Never reading anything else from you.

Even KNOWING it wouldn't be wrapped up I STILL read it because it's a GREAT story!!! Just WISH you'd of finished it! I read ALL of your stories and gave Every One of them five stars but didn't want to comment until now, like I said I KNEW it WASN'T finished! You're a Great author I wished you'd had more!!!

Having stayed up reading intil6.30 am to read to the end of this story you can imagine my disappointment at the lack of ending. Despite this, the fact I did stay up so late is a tribute to the degree of immersement I had in this story, Nevertheless I still gave it 5*s