by Many Feathers
I truly enjoyed this story vary well written and imaginative too
I find your stories are very well written. There isnt a incest story that I haven't enjoyed. I do like the sister and brother stories the most but throw mom into the story just kicks it up a notch. I grew up with three sisters but list my mother at an early age of 15. Ive always thought what it would be like. Ive learn to put myself in the story and it gives feeling I could only dream of. Please keep writing these stories.
Thank you
MISS SONAL G PARAKH,
I AM ELDER DAUGHTER OF MYMOM MRS KUNDAN G PARAKH SHE IS THE MOST SEXEY WOMEN IN OUR HOUSE SHE GET FUCKED ONE OF HER FRIEND MR.SANAJY ROY,HE IS HAVING 9"LONG TOOL WHICH MY MOM GET RAMMED DAILY I LOOK AT HER DAILY WHEN SHE GET RAMMED
ONCE SHE SAW ME WHILE SHE GET FUCKING AFTER FUCKING SHE CALL ME AND TOLD EVERYTHING AND MAKE ME AGREE TO GET FUCKED GRUP FUCKING AND I MAKE MY SMALL SISTER AGREE TO JOIN US AND NOW WE TWO SISTER AND MOM GET NUDE IN SAME BED AND MY MOM GET PREGNANT AND NOW SHE WANT TO GIVE BIRTH TO A CHILD AND SHE TOLD ME TO MARREY TO SANJAY AND MAKE A MOTHER OF THAT CHILD.
PLEASE HELP ME
MY E AMIL IS papiya2011_12@rediffmail.com
tell me what to do only ladies can write me
by order
miss sonal g parakh (roy)
This really got me hard, my dick got harder and harder as a steel log, I really worked it out. My lady loves it when her pussy gets a workout. I got 12 inches at first and it grew to 16 and 4 inches around. Once I cum, it covered my lady's pussy inside and out and over her tits and face.
i think the story was good I liked the fucking that was going on first the mom then the sisters al of them loved to fuck he seemed to love to fuck all of the girls he was living and fucking one of his sisters and the other one he fucked her and then his twine sister he fucked her out of her cherry when mom left the room when they were fucking there was a hint that mom was going to get fucked by her son again I love all the fucking that was in this story
Yet another great story (as always) ☺☺
Please continue writing as I always enjoy your strories
Very well written story. Hot when it needed to and sweet and romantic as well.
This is one of the best stories I've read. Hope to see it continued!
I liked the story a lot . the understand between all them is so close . any chance of more hope so thank you for this story
So wordy and oversold, after page 3 I lost interest, the story just got more and more dull, and as I was starting to lose the will to live, I gave it up. No stars
Was this a fanfic sort-of thing or a fiction or what? I'm confused.
Excelent story and as always with your stories very well written. Many thanks :)
You sir, have earned yourself a bushel basket of Eagle feathers on this one.
Thank you for writing this and please keep writing.
I grew up on another side of my family..adopted by grandmas sister, learned of her side of the blood and a few cousins helped bring me up to speed at 9 yeard old and had me keeping them happy for about seven years. I loved them dearly both by heart and flesh.
I relate with the sisters part but never saw mom . Both needed me each seven rounds a day! That ladted about half a year til I wore out.
Keep up the writing..maybe go a bit further on this...
This story would've been better served being titled: The Four Sisters and Mom....
Great many faceted story, quite enjoyable. Thanks for posting for all to enjoy!
You sir have got to be the luckiest guy I have ever heard of
Haha mind introducing me?
This has to be the absolute best thought out, well written incest story I've ever read. It brought back a lot of memories of growing up too. I have 2 older sisters that were always fascinated by my erections back then. Even at an early age I was fascinated by their beauty and I loved the way they loved and kissed on me. When I was 9 my oldest sister who was in the throes of puberty at 13 took my virginity while our 11 year old sister watched. I really didn't know what we were doing back then, but I knew I loved it. I could go at it over and over with out cumming then and my sister loved it because she didn't have to worry about getting pregnant. My 11 year old sister wanted to of course do it too, but she was so tight it took a few more weeks before we stretched her enough for me to slide in. My oldest sister had us do it doggie the first time while she licked her sister's clit. After that she couldn't get enough. My older sister liked to do it 4 or 5 times a week but my other sister wanted it 4 or 5 times a day. We all continued to have sex right up till the night before my wedding when I was 26. Neither of my sisters ever got married. They moved to California and started a bakery together which became very successful. My marriage lasted 7 years and after my divorce they sent me a plane ticket and asked me to come stay with them awhile. That was 12 years ago and I'm still with them and never plan to leave. In fact I wish I had never left them. I love both of my sisters more than I love life. I know now we were meant to be together and I love being back where I belong.
was liking the story line then you gates it up having him take a vibrator to the ass...NOT COOL!!! should warn people
I read this whole story without ever getting hard - that's NOT a bad thing!
I loved this story! So many ways this can go from here. I was drawn into each sisters "mind", I shared their emotions, their confusion and their desires - mom and Jake as well. Please come back to them and share with us, (your readers) this wonderful feeling of love and care once again.
Willing to help with plotlines if desired but ,wow your have done SO well on your own.
Thank you for such a sexy tail that gave my so much compfort as well :)
Well, SOMEONE'S getting just the most marvelous mother's day present.
All joking aside, quality work.
You slept with your sisters and mother. You know how it feels na. Return!!!
either a lot of underage virgins here or a lot of readers paid to give rave reviews on subpar work. there was a lot wrong with this so called story like him accepting all the teasing and the girls keeping secrets from him both would drive him away. only a few honest comments and they are unfavorable. this would have been better in the NONEROTIC area because it was a total turn off.
Jake's sex life is a dream come true for plenty of boys. He not only fucks all three of his sisters, but he sticks his well-used prick up the same cunt he came out of--his own mother's cunt. I agree with the commenters who write that Jake should marry the sister he's closest to. That way he can keep fucking her all the time, unload his brotherly balls up her sisterly twat any time he feels like it, and, best of all, fuck a baby--lots of babies--up her pretty little twat. A heartwarming example of true family values.
I have read probably 1000 stories and this is one of the best I have ever read. It really needs a follow up.
The bond between twins is very strong it seems strange there are not a lot more stories like this but starting with the twins and eventually getting the rest of an open-minded family involved.
Its been several years since this was first posted how about a follow up?
I Agree with others this Story needs a Follow-up. it lends itself to Jake and Dawn with her Married name Marrying her Brother and the Rest staying on in a Different town and eventually state where No one knows them.
Please consider Jack marrying one of his sisters, even though it's been 7 years since you wrote this wonderful tale of incestuous lovemaking and discovery.
would love to read more of what happens with Jack, sisters, and his mother if they all have sexy together or not
unfortunately couldn't rate as high as it deserved. the scale is only 1-5 and this story is at least an 11!!!!
keep up the good work
i love the story! thank you writing this and for the person who put "unbelievable" if this is something you dont like stop reading! i hate it jerks put down authors who take their time to give a story to us and for the person who put "page 9" i agree completely!
This is one fucked up family. Come on get real, Then at the end, seems like Jackie was having a baby, instead of being fucked. Come on writer, plus the story was way to long. Yes, it was somewhat interesting, but way unbelieveable.
we need a page 9 when the whole family comes together, not from lust but from love.
I like the Dawn character. Physically, she reminds me of an old acquaintance named Dawn. I also liked the tenderness of Jake and Jackie's coupling, with Mom there to help.
I think that this is a great story. I really think you could make it even better if you wrote a sequel to this that tells your fans what all happens between them after this. That would be great. Anyways, great story, 5 stars.
another hot story. i only wish we could have seen the day after thanksgiving with the whole group.
A bit too long but however very very beautiful one and well written.Jake is lucky to have these women for hImself and lovIng him.However,i would have preferred the Mum was out of the story,but only that she was aware only that her kids were fucking and accepted it.Anyway thks.
It was abit long in the build-up, but still a great story. Need to have a followup with where they go from this point.
made me come 4 times, u can imagine the amout of lub i used.... wish i had a family like this!! (I hv a bro that walks around in his briefs to much, so I kinda knw hw big he is... He's huge soft... I can onli imagine hw big he is hard!!) my family is so close minded, they dnt even like talking about les or gay fam fwnds, i think their ashamed of them... which reali sux considering im Bi......... bt oh well, they nt gona knw anytime soon. loved it! bt would b nice to hav a finishing chapter:)
A very good story, I enjoyed it very nuch. The ending could have been better, kept me stoking.
Why do you have to be so damn critical,anonymous? Read it and enjoy or
go on to another story . GB
This was published here 08/20/2005. The link you gave has it published there 12/01/2006. And he had it on here under a different name before that. You should probably check dates before accusing someone of plagiarism.
And great story MF.
he copied it off
http://www.exbii.com/showthread.php?s=904e40fbd31496ba3bf24fa5ef5dce84&t=99429
It reminds me of my childhood, I also fucked my baby sister and later fucked my mom after she caught us fucking one night,I am 72 my si is 70 and I still screw her with my wife joining us often, her pussy is as still as good as it was then.
Its always enjoyable to read this account..of Family's experience.....I also agree that..there should an additional chapter or a closing chapter......Very good story....wished I had a family that open..
Everytime I read this story I enjoy it very much. It would be nice if you were to write a second chapter that was about the next moring with them all finally revealing their secrets. The way you wrote the relationship between Jackie and Jake just makes me wonder if they end up really staying together forever. It seems that Jackie is the sister that Jake cares most about. Anyways, GREAT story, hope you are able to write more. 5***** toby9790.
i loved this greatly..............would have loved a morning with all together and the discussion that came about with all secrets revealed and then maybe an all family lovefest and then maybe a little bit about if they all moved in oldest sis to play...opps..meant stay
with another chapter or two. Continue to explore their relationships with each other, and maybe get him to get one of the women pregnant.
Good work.
Having only one sister I read this tale and felt cheated out of what could have been a great life with sisters. Then I remembered that I didn't much like the sister I grew up with and i decided to just enjoy the fantasy world you created.
Well done. It was fun, well written andhot! Thanks.
I believe it could have been longer. But still a very good story. Continue to write.
I have to say that is one of the best stories I have ever read, I only wish you would have filled in the next morning for us. Thanks again for the great read. Hell I have been to this site plenty of times but this story made me want to register and say thanks.
Once again you have managed to put everything together in a very well written story. I was absolutely captivated from the very beginning to the very end. Like some of the others though, I would really like to see some sort of continuation of this story to put things to rest.
Your amazing writing ability is only surpassed by your amazing ability to draw your reading deeper and deeper into the believable lives of your characters. Please continue to develop your talents as an author and share with the world the wonderful results.
Love to read more, please email me with any new additions to your library.
Michelle Jo
Really good writing. I liked how everyone came into play. I didn't like the way it ended. A spin off or longer ending would be be great Thanks it was a good story,I enjoyed reading it. W.S.
you expect us to believe that he puts up with the teasing and them keeping secrets from him but that he is still willing to fuck them no way he would go out of his way to avoid them going so far as to go to another college to get away from them and he sure wouldn't ever go back please keep your stories realistic and believable
it is obvious you had carefully planned and written this story.
I just want to congratulate you and emphasise you did great!
thanks!
unrealistic no guy would act like that after all the teaseing and the mother taking the girls aside for a secret talk he would have gone out of his way to ignore and avoid all of them and would deffinetly not go to the same school as his sister try to keep it atleast sounding realistic and not like something out of the twilight zone
Long story! Great work! I wish I were in his position... any of them! ^.^
Sometimes, reality can be mirrored in story. I know your story is a mirror, though slightly different, of my own reality. And in my case, the ending has yet to to come, and because we love each other so dearly, I truly think it never will. Thanks for telling the story.
"mommy's here to help you" wow what a powerful story, as I read that statement I almost lost it, emotionally charged, yeh you might think me a right wank but I did enjoy the story, real pleasure to read something well written.
The day persons can make things like were did in the story without guilty and remorse we will get the real freedom.
In a case I know, the mother becomes bitter. I liked your story better.
I enjoy stories in which the participants show courtesy and respect, and if love can be mixed in, so much the better. You certainly did that. I do agree with the reviewer who said it seemed odd that all 4 women were understanding and eager. I disagree, though, that you should write more of it; you ended at a very nice place. These things need not go on forever. Enjoyed it very much.
JRM
Sex, humor, anal, virgins, this story has it all. Exceptionally well written. A great story.
this story is great!! you should really extend it and complete it, it ends a little unclear. But it is the second best story i have read so far!! I will defenitly read it again and hope that it will be extended when i do. thank you for the great story, you rock.
I have read this story many times, and each time I have really enjoyed it.
although my position in the socity is not allowing me to read that kind of those stories but , i simply read it....
it is horribly good i could never stop reading although it is so long ,
if it is made to a movie
don't forget to send me the link .....
Of course it is an impossibility of something like this ever happening in reality, but it is great to get away from reality once in a while, to read a fabulous erotic story
like this one. Thankyou so much.
What would make these tales better is if you had more graphically described him ejaculating into or onto his mother and sisters, especially the final deflowering of his virgin twin. That would have been hotter. Otherwise, a great, hot story.
Whatever you call yourself, whatever problems you may have had, I have no knowledge of them, but have just read 'My Three Sister _ and Mom. Guess I am now a bit speechless, excuse the french, but it is fucking brilliant. You managed to put yourself into the minds of four totally different women while speaking, (and writing as a man). Don't ever stop writing, your words are amongst the best in Literotica...Well done
Peter
A mother plus one sister could be enough of a challange. But THREE sisters, all different, WOW! You surely don't mind biting off a lot! My only problem, and it is quite small, is that each of the ladies was so understanding...I would have expected at least one to have had more mixed feelings. Full feathers to you Many Feathers!!!
Absolutely Fantastic Story
Very, very well written. Fluent, and creative. Its definately sure to get anyone's juice's stirring.
The mix of personalities here, is like a thread that adds to itself and just keeps moving forward. In a way it reminds me of the "Boy in Babeland" series. The link of course is the love that Jake, his sisters, and his VERY hip mother, share. The one thing that the porn kings have never been able to devert my attention from is that love and sex, for me anyway, cannot be separated for long. THAT is why the most successful stories on this site are successful at all! I love the sex in this story. So hot, and erotic, and wet. The love they share kicks it in to high gear for me, and for many others I suspect. Shall it always be! Well done Many Feathers. My only complaint? Where's the rest of the story?
Sure glad you reposted this it is one of my favs:)
Very good, and well written, good how you added humour to it too... like bit where describe his dig being huge by saying "behemoth" the big bastards from some final fantasy games!
Probably the best series I have ever read on this site.
A good blend of hot sex with emotion. Made me hard, horny, and yet made me feel good about the entire experience.
A well written story wish there was more to read was sorry to see it end a very well written story and I hope to read more of your stories thank you for a well thought out story
mt
Excellent story. Liked it lots.
Way too long for one part - could easily have been posted in 4-5 parts.
And the anal bits were dirty and unnecessary.
Lukas
i was so turned on by this storey that i shot my load in my pants
But it's the most well-written story I've read, bar none.
It reads like poetry, like art itself.
However it's not of my taste... but still, the ratings hardly do justice to this story.
That is the best and hottest story in a long time, not only did I cum in my pants but I shit and pissed my self too, what a wonderful feeling, great story worth more than a 5.
thoroughly enjoyed it. i would surely like a sequel. more of the mom and son duo and in secret would be awesome. you are super writer. keep it up!!!