by Firsttimeguy
Well done with great pacing.
Just make sure to read and then reread your story to eliminate some of the mistakes I saw here.
Five stars.
A fast-paced, wild, crazy story.....and the finish - fabulous. Looking forward to the next Chapter!!!!
I appreciated the feedback and comments. I ask you please deal with the few mistakes as writing is not my strong suit.
looking forward to seeing where this goes. Don't let the noodle dicks harass you too much on here. 5* from me.